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Ρεасә ïń Dәатң
Contributed by
poison_touch666
on
Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 08:40:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Take the gun to my head,
Pull the trigger fall to the floor,
Laying so cold and dead,
Won't have to cry anymore,
No more need for the razor,
No more tears for the past,
Could end my inner war,
Let go with one quick blast,
Stop the pain, the blood, the tears,
Finish all my ****ed up fears,
But instead i hold onto false hope,
I lay awake at night and wonder,
Is it better to live in ignorence or die in truth?
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poison_touch666
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2003-12-27 08:40:59] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Ρεасә ïń Dәатң
(User Rating: 1 ) by mercedes on
Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 10:26:51 AM AEST (User
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Great write. I especially liked the last line |
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Re: Ρεасә ïń Dәатң
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 02:49:20 PM AEST (User
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well done! Im sorry for your pain.If you need to pm me Im here for you
michelle |
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Re: Ρεасә ïń Dәатң
(User Rating: 1 ) by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 11:12:28 AM AEST (User
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wow! this is really well expressed. and i to like to last line. it helps pull things altogher. |
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