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dolly

Contributed by stitches on Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 08:16:13 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



eyes bleeding
as i see their smiles
push the buttons
turn those cold hard dials
stitch by stitch
you take me apart
i'm falling to pieces

like a broken doll
you pull my strings
look how i dance
as the same words i repeat
love me, love me

a rolled up bill
i'll walk the "lines"
eyes so wide
i'm hard to find
it's dark in this corner
i'm losing my mind

my heart it likens
to rusty gates
so hard to open
yet quick to break
the sharp steel remnants
they call to me
i'll simply fall
to finally be free




Copyright © stitches ... [ 2003-12-27 08:16:13]
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Re: dolly (User Rating: 1 )
by Cancer on Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 11:45:37 PM AEST
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don't guess you ever showed me this one. i like it.
"a rolled up bill
i'll walk the 'lines'"
i'll pretend i didn't see that.

i esp. loved the last stanza. i won't get too gushy or you might not believe me, like you will anyway, but whatever. nice scrawl.

51


Re: dolly (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 09:20:56 PM AEST
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this was good especially the 1st stanza don't know what brought this on, but the end result was a good poem.

Bobo (Joel)




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