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I Wish
Contributed by
eternal_sorrows
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Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 04:25:07 AM in AEST
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I only wish you were here
to take away all my fear
to hold my hand and walk me through
this path of life I'm destined to.
Inside I scream of hurt and sorrow
wishing for better days tomorrow
yet, tomorrow is just another day
no different then yesterday.
Silent tears do not heal
this inner pain which I feel
and hopes and dreams don't take away
this loneliness I feel today.
Why can't I just accept
memories past I can't forget
start all over, fresh anew
see life from a different view?
Though hard I try to move on
deep emotions still stir strong.
They haunt me every now and then
making me yet, grieve again.
Yes, I only wish you were here
for I still love you and miss you dear
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Re: I Wish
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by harshreality on
Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 04:54:18 AM AEST
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I feel this. I have someone I truly miss too. I hope everything works out for you. This was beautiful.
Always hope and believe in your dreams
It helps you to cope with the trivial things. |
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Re: I Wish
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 07:51:13 AM AEST
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Excellent write...I can relate to the words that you have written here. Tragic to miss someone so much...very painful. All the best fr you too.
Emma. |
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Re: I Wish
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by hot-shot on
Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 02:16:38 PM AEST
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| Wow...after reading ur poem..i feel ur lov for tht person is 2 much...wish u good luck..hot-shot |
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Re: I Wish
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 12:28:54 PM AEST
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It's the way we are made. We had to have a good memory to survive through the 3 or 4 million years since we first walked tall and made tools.
Would you really like to forget. I suffered an injury during the war when I was in the RAF
and lost my memory for a short period. Apparently I walked and talked normally but I dont remember any of it.
Suddenly, as I was going into the canteen "I woke up" at least my memory returned slowly.
The first thing I heard myself say was........"At least I know my name's Mackay!" Gradually I clawed it back, a frightening experience,but never the bit between the crash and that point.
It's always bugged me. I would hate to have lost more than that short period.
bob |
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