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Array ( [sid] => 30200 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Ask Your Self [time] => 2003-12-26 19:51:08 [hometext] => an inpirational poem [bodytext] => Ask Your Self
5/30/2002

Sometime in the night you
Awake & ask your self
When is somebody going to
Stand at your side?

Some where in your mind
You ask your self your self to find somebody
Who might help you through
Your troubled times.

Something hurts inside your heart
You ask you self what it is all you
Feel is the emptiness
Inside.

Sometime in the morning
When the sun comes to rise
You ask your self how come
Time wont move slow?

Somewhere in the tears
You’ve cried you ask your
Self why do I have to be
So alone so sad?

Something crushes you down
To the pavement ripping apart your
Skin to bleed you ask your self
Why’d this happen to me?

Sometime in the breeze you
Hear the voices tell
You cruel things you ask
Your self what you did so wrong?

©CareBear [comments] => 2 [counter] => 384 [topic] => 19 [informant] => carebear [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

Ask Your Self

Contributed by carebear on Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 07:51:08 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Ask Your Self
5/30/2002

Sometime in the night you
Awake & ask your self
When is somebody going to
Stand at your side?

Some where in your mind
You ask your self your self to find somebody
Who might help you through
Your troubled times.

Something hurts inside your heart
You ask you self what it is all you
Feel is the emptiness
Inside.

Sometime in the morning
When the sun comes to rise
You ask your self how come
Time wont move slow?

Somewhere in the tears
You’ve cried you ask your
Self why do I have to be
So alone so sad?

Something crushes you down
To the pavement ripping apart your
Skin to bleed you ask your self
Why’d this happen to me?

Sometime in the breeze you
Hear the voices tell
You cruel things you ask
Your self what you did so wrong?

©CareBear

Copyright Â© carebear ... [ 2003-12-26 19:51:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Ask Your Self (User Rating: 1 )
by dumfries on Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 08:09:49 AM AEST
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your self your self....was that a typo?
It was interesting.

Re: Ask Your Self (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 07:33:27 PM AEST
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I've felt like this so many times this was beautiful. Although the repetition of 'ask your self' got a little tiresome after awhile, but still very good.

Bobo (Joel)

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