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Array ( [sid] => 30177 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Ocean's Secret [time] => 2003-12-26 04:03:27 [hometext] => This is one of my old ones [bodytext] => The raging water, what is hidden
What is the secret that's so forbidden
What happened on that cool dark night
There were no witnesses, no one in sight
It started as just an evening out
Just him and his wife, there was no doubt
Lately for them things have been rough
She had thought to herself that love was enough
Dessert was coming, he started to yell
She hoped this wouldn't have turned to hell
He said 'Go out to the car, I'll meet you there'
He paid for the food and started pulling her hair
He pushed and shoved her into the car
Then proceeded to drive somewhere very far
They ended out far in the woods
To get away, she tried all she could
She ran away, he got his gun
He told her to stop or her life would be done
She fell to the ground, he tied her up
Opium he poured into a cup
Up to her lips hi forced her to drink
The ingredient has a purpose, all you do is think
He went to the truck, took out a knife
The question is who will loose their life
He ripped off her clothes and proceeded to cut
In his face she saw the mutt
She started to fight, she made several kicks
He told her to stop and that she's only a chick
She managed to get free, she grabbed his gun
She didn't know what to do, but what had to be done
He knew he was in danger, he ran to the truck
The position he was in really did suck
He grabbed the other gun, what a bad situation
Yet what's the real reason for the confliction
He turned around, echoed were shots
So now who is unwantingly on top
The damage is done, there's no way back
This is the end to all tings that were lacked
The experience has been one big thrill
But the questionis Who was killed? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 13 [informant] => CuttersAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
The Ocean's Secret

Contributed by CuttersAngel on Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 04:03:27 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



The raging water, what is hidden
What is the secret that's so forbidden
What happened on that cool dark night
There were no witnesses, no one in sight
It started as just an evening out
Just him and his wife, there was no doubt
Lately for them things have been rough
She had thought to herself that love was enough
Dessert was coming, he started to yell
She hoped this wouldn't have turned to hell
He said 'Go out to the car, I'll meet you there'
He paid for the food and started pulling her hair
He pushed and shoved her into the car
Then proceeded to drive somewhere very far
They ended out far in the woods
To get away, she tried all she could
She ran away, he got his gun
He told her to stop or her life would be done
She fell to the ground, he tied her up
Opium he poured into a cup
Up to her lips hi forced her to drink
The ingredient has a purpose, all you do is think
He went to the truck, took out a knife
The question is who will loose their life
He ripped off her clothes and proceeded to cut
In his face she saw the mutt
She started to fight, she made several kicks
He told her to stop and that she's only a chick
She managed to get free, she grabbed his gun
She didn't know what to do, but what had to be done
He knew he was in danger, he ran to the truck
The position he was in really did suck
He grabbed the other gun, what a bad situation
Yet what's the real reason for the confliction
He turned around, echoed were shots
So now who is unwantingly on top
The damage is done, there's no way back
This is the end to all tings that were lacked
The experience has been one big thrill
But the questionis Who was killed?




Copyright © CuttersAngel ... [ 2003-12-26 04:03:27]
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Re: The Ocean's Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 04:28:48 AM AEST
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very dark poem with a vivid paint.. venkat


Re: The Ocean's Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by mercedes on Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 10:02:19 AM AEST
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I agree with Venket, very good write. As so who was killed, i hope it was he.




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