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Array ( [sid] => 30088 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I cant live without it [time] => 2003-12-24 02:05:22 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You said you would always be there for me
You said you had a shoulder to lend
You said no matter what, friends we would be
Until the very end

Has the end arrived so very soon?
Or did you just chose to lie to me?
Why did you run when I finally felt safe
Safe enough to open up to you?

Is my life so bad even you cant stand it?
Do you think I’m making up the pain I feel?
Just learn to relax and let go like you
If only I could

Fine, leave, see if I care
I don’t need you anyway
I have my life to live or take
Whichever I so chose

You were never a true friend
You were a phantom of my imagination
You were there only when it suited you
My life did not matter

Seems you taught me a lesson after all
When I finally turned my anger towards you
I realized my life may mean nothing to you
But I cant live without it
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 361 [topic] => 6 [informant] => mercedes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
I cant live without it

Contributed by mercedes on Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:05:22 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



You said you would always be there for me
You said you had a shoulder to lend
You said no matter what, friends we would be
Until the very end

Has the end arrived so very soon?
Or did you just chose to lie to me?
Why did you run when I finally felt safe
Safe enough to open up to you?

Is my life so bad even you cant stand it?
Do you think I’m making up the pain I feel?
Just learn to relax and let go like you
If only I could

Fine, leave, see if I care
I don’t need you anyway
I have my life to live or take
Whichever I so chose

You were never a true friend
You were a phantom of my imagination
You were there only when it suited you
My life did not matter

Seems you taught me a lesson after all
When I finally turned my anger towards you
I realized my life may mean nothing to you
But I cant live without it




Copyright © mercedes ... [ 2003-12-24 02:05:22]
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Re: I cant live without it (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:10:19 AM AEST
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the end of a friendship is hard to go through but through your words I can see your conviction and strength. People come and go you will find the ones who are true and they will continue with you on your journey steadfast and true. Great write.
michelle


Re: I cant live without it (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:16:55 AM AEST
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Sad but great writing!
We all fall short at times.
happy holidays-n-huggs,
emy


Re: I cant live without it (User Rating: 1 )
by a_t0rtured_s0ul on Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:35:47 AM AEST
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very good. i loved it. it fits in very well with my writing topic and style. keep it up.


Re: I cant live without it (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 01:28:33 AM AEST
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Whoa... Whom was that directed towards. Pretty harsh but incredibly well expressed. I dunno what to make of this one though I liked it.




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