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Spurning the ones who care
With words like
I'm fine
It's nothing
There's nothing wrong
When you know that
Deep inside you the voices
Scream for release
But you keep it in
For fear of angering those you love
Why are you angry
What have they done that
Is so destructive
NOTHING!
You sit in silence as their
Words of love wash over you
What do you gain
Other than an ache in your heart
And a feeling of
"I should have done this"
It's so foolish of me
FOOLISHNESS!
I hope you can forgive me... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 203 [topic] => 48 [informant] => TheVarsh [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Foolishness

Contributed by TheVarsh on Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 12:23:48 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

FOOLISHNESS!
Spurning the ones who care
With words like
I'm fine
It's nothing
There's nothing wrong
When you know that
Deep inside you the voices
Scream for release
But you keep it in
For fear of angering those you love
Why are you angry
What have they done that
Is so destructive
NOTHING!
You sit in silence as their
Words of love wash over you
What do you gain
Other than an ache in your heart
And a feeling of
"I should have done this"
It's so foolish of me
FOOLISHNESS!
I hope you can forgive me...

Copyright © TheVarsh ... [ 2003-12-24 00:23:48]
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Re: Foolishness (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 12:35:58 AM AEST
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I don't think you're an idiot.... this was a fine piece of work..good show of feelings..
Jenni

Re: Foolishness (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 12:36:57 AM AEST
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this is sad but i can understand it.. i've felt this way before myself.. very well expressed

great job

Peace joy and hope
JENNA

Re: Foolishness (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:35:43 AM AEST
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I agree with Jen your not an idiot..........I say ba hum bug on that!! Some situations are hard specially when it comes toloved ones and being painfully honest about your feelings.
Michelle

Re: Foolishness (User Rating: 1 )
by Ldy_Tryst_Vampyrre on Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 12:02:48 PM AEST
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you are far from being an idiot....just open up to love and see your troubles vanish in the light that love creates....talk to her...she will understand. blessed be.

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