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Array ( [sid] => 30062 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => hold on [time] => 2003-12-23 18:58:28 [hometext] => this is quite important to me even if it was just written in the spur of the moment with only emotion feeding it and no real thought behind it [bodytext] => i dont want to let go of
this feeling
its tearing me apart now
and for the longest time love
filled my empty life
while my pride and fear
drove you away from me
i was comfortable in that
line between the shadow
that is my disguise and the
light that are your eyes (the ones
that might see me one day)
even now im clinging to the edge
but your silence proves
that i was living through a lie.

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hold on

Contributed by fallensilence on Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 06:58:28 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

i dont want to let go of
this feeling
its tearing me apart now
and for the longest time love
filled my empty life
while my pride and fear
drove you away from me
i was comfortable in that
line between the shadow
that is my disguise and the
light that are your eyes (the ones
that might see me one day)
even now im clinging to the edge
but your silence proves
that i was living through a lie.

Copyright © fallensilence ... [ 2003-12-23 18:58:28]
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Re: hold on (User Rating: 1 )
by mercedes on Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 11:14:32 PM AEST
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This is a good write though it is very sad. Hope it all works out for you

Re: hold on (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 09:50:56 AM AEST
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strikes a chord with me. raw, brutally honesty and with a sense of yearning for something that i can't put my finger on.

i've missed your words, love Kate x

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