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creeping from thier shadowed dens
children wailing for thier mothers
screaming in thier burning cribs
image blurred but coming clearer
pulsing across the bloodied walls
thoughts transform
as night grows deeper
stretching into new found skin
Cain is dancing at his fire
colder than the judgements eyes
cackling at my own impression
the reflection shows what is to be
psychotic delusions or a dying soul
a captured life, submissive once
is now becoming the better of me
a broken mirror frees the wanting
but now...

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pandoras box

Contributed by stitches on Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 03:04:23 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

restless cries bring forth the madmen
creeping from thier shadowed dens
children wailing for thier mothers
screaming in thier burning cribs
image blurred but coming clearer
pulsing across the bloodied walls
thoughts transform
as night grows deeper
stretching into new found skin
Cain is dancing at his fire
colder than the judgements eyes
cackling at my own impression
the reflection shows what is to be
psychotic delusions or a dying soul
a captured life, submissive once
is now becoming the better of me
a broken mirror frees the wanting
but now...

INSANITY

Copyright © stitches ... [ 2003-12-23 15:04:23]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: pandoras box (User Rating: 1 )
by SkYYBLu on Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 04:02:48 PM AEST
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What a powerful poem! Keep it up!

Re: pandoras box (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 05:35:32 PM AEST
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eery and dark

But good nonetheless

Kie

Re: pandoras box (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 02:06:01 AM AEST
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mmmm this was odd but good nonetheless i loved the imagery in this 'pulsing across the bloodied walls' that was beautiful. Great poem keep on writing.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: pandoras box (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 05:36:52 PM AEST
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holy ****!!! i like your writing style! everything is so strong and real! i could see all of this happening!

luv,
myrts

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