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Array ( [sid] => 30030 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Untitled [time] => 2003-12-23 08:56:58 [hometext] => I just can't think of a proper title and I hate leaving this untitled, so if any of you come up with something Please let me know. [bodytext] => Maybe I should call to let him know I care;
If he doesn't call back,
I won't do it again -
This time I swear ....

I know he's just afraid;
We talked so long the other night ....
Now he's pulling away -
Can't get too close,
I know how this game is played!

I'll try a few more times periodicly ....
Know I said I wouldn't,
But our last conversation really got to me ....

If its been long enough,
Sometimes I get lucky -
And he'll open back up;

It happens ya know -
He really does care....
And if I catch him at exactly the right time -
He lets it show.

Those are the moments I live for.
Everytime I hope and pray,
He won't turn from me anymore ....
This will be the time that changes everything,
This time he'll forget to pull away....

It wasn't though,
Not tonight;
But tommorows another day ....
Another chance that he might. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 263 [topic] => 22 [informant] => harshreality [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Untitled

Contributed by harshreality on Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 08:56:58 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Maybe I should call to let him know I care;
If he doesn't call back,
I won't do it again -
This time I swear ....

I know he's just afraid;
We talked so long the other night ....
Now he's pulling away -
Can't get too close,
I know how this game is played!

I'll try a few more times periodicly ....
Know I said I wouldn't,
But our last conversation really got to me ....

If its been long enough,
Sometimes I get lucky -
And he'll open back up;

It happens ya know -
He really does care....
And if I catch him at exactly the right time -
He lets it show.

Those are the moments I live for.
Everytime I hope and pray,
He won't turn from me anymore ....
This will be the time that changes everything,
This time he'll forget to pull away....

It wasn't though,
Not tonight;
But tommorows another day ....
Another chance that he might.

Copyright © harshreality ... [ 2003-12-23 08:56:58]
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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by EternitysLyre on Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 09:09:41 AM AEST
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Hope.

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by 13Hopes on Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 09:18:31 AM AEST
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I agree, Hope.......
Never give up..

Cheers
#13

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 09:58:05 AM AEST
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I cant think of a title, but the feeling I get from this is Imperfect Timing. Hoping you catch them at the right moment , but it never quite happens.

I truly enjoyed this.

Larry

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 11:08:43 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this... thanks for sharing.

As for the title -- depending on the perspective you want to get across... "Another Chance That He Might", "This Time I Swear" or "Not Tonight" would all be great titles.

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 01:58:35 PM AEST
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I agree hope... This eerily reminded me of me... Kinda scary. I liked it alot though.

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 02:28:14 AM AEST
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Good write. Truth expels from your words. How though can so many people believe this just to get hurt time and time again. I might not have been in the same situation as you, but I have been in something very similar. Thanks for sharing.

Emma.

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by swiftsouljah on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:26:23 PM AEST
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Pull away
or
moments i live for

but yeah caught in the same cycle...

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