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Array ( [sid] => 30021 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => MELANCHOLY YEAR [time] => 2003-12-23 06:37:26 [hometext] => ............just remembering........... [bodytext] => I remember the
evergreen tree
Daddy had cut down....

I see the antique
lights and ornaments
adorning the tree.......

I can still feel the
excitment of
motherhood
upon me........

I can still feel
the joy I felt
at your first
movement
within me.......

I was so thankful
for finally feeling
free and believing
in what I thought
was love.......

I have snapshots
of your first holiday
and every one after
that until
you left me...........

I am missing that picture
of my lost christmas
but it's forever
etched into
my mind......

I do not have
a memory
of this time of
year without it
leading to you....

I plead the angels
above
to keep you
safe ..........
for I know longer
feel the remembrance
of you in my arms
because it's
been too long........

I will cry for the
loss of you
on the inside
while all the others
see only
laughter and
joy....... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 231 [topic] => 48 [informant] => jaeann [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

MELANCHOLY YEAR

Contributed by jaeann on Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 06:37:26 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I remember the
evergreen tree
Daddy had cut down....

I see the antique
lights and ornaments
adorning the tree.......

I can still feel the
excitment of
motherhood
upon me........

I can still feel
the joy I felt
at your first
movement
within me.......

I was so thankful
for finally feeling
free and believing
in what I thought
was love.......

I have snapshots
of your first holiday
and every one after
that until
you left me...........

I am missing that picture
of my lost christmas
but it's forever
etched into
my mind......

I do not have
a memory
of this time of
year without it
leading to you....

I plead the angels
above
to keep you
safe ..........
for I know longer
feel the remembrance
of you in my arms
because it's
been too long........

I will cry for the
loss of you
on the inside
while all the others
see only
laughter and
joy.......

Copyright © jaeann ... [ 2003-12-23 06:37:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: MELANCHOLY YEAR (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 09:51:23 AM AEST
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oh yessss.....the one we can never forget. Outstanding write.
Well done
Larry

Re: MELANCHOLY YEAR (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 02:17:26 PM AEST
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Oh My Dear Jaymee girl.
That's the only time I wouldn't like to live inside out....then everyone would be able to see our pleading ,crying hearts!
Perhaps that's why we are given a smile....it can never replace our bleeding hearts...but perhaps it can help us to get a new start!
Warm Love, and Hugs
ConSue

Re: MELANCHOLY YEAR (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 09:56:36 AM AEST
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Left me with a lump in my throat. That feeling of having to pretend because others are so tired of your pain or just don't know how to handle it anymore. Good stuff.
Stitch

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