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Array ( [sid] => 29971 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Changing Seasons [time] => 2003-12-22 21:38:34 [hometext] => This was the first poem I wrote. Please let me know what you think. [bodytext] => As the sun disappears behind the tops of the trees,
On my face I can feel a slightly cool breeze.
Fall is coming, it is near for us now,
The season of summer is taking a bow.
The September leaves change colors before my eyes,
Not too much longer until winter arrives.
A new day is here with the break of the dawn,
I look through my window to see frost on the lawn.
The air outside is crisp and new,
It seems winter has made its debut.
A few months from now it will all melt away,
And we will again rise to another new day.
Sun through my window,birds in the trees.
New seedlings are sprouting,there is warmth on the breeze.
And soon we'll go back to the place where I stand.
Where I feel Mother Nature is holding my hand.
As the sun disappears behind the tops of the trees,
On my face I can feel a slightly cool breeze.

Copyright ©2003 Joy Futrell
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Changing Seasons

Contributed by Joy on Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 09:38:34 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

As the sun disappears behind the tops of the trees,
On my face I can feel a slightly cool breeze.
Fall is coming, it is near for us now,
The season of summer is taking a bow.
The September leaves change colors before my eyes,
Not too much longer until winter arrives.
A new day is here with the break of the dawn,
I look through my window to see frost on the lawn.
The air outside is crisp and new,
It seems winter has made its debut.
A few months from now it will all melt away,
And we will again rise to another new day.
Sun through my window,birds in the trees.
New seedlings are sprouting,there is warmth on the breeze.
And soon we'll go back to the place where I stand.
Where I feel Mother Nature is holding my hand.
As the sun disappears behind the tops of the trees,
On my face I can feel a slightly cool breeze.

Copyright ©2003 Joy Futrell

Copyright Â© Joy ... [ 2003-12-22 21:38:34]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Changing Seasons (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 10:11:36 PM AEST
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very good write, good use of imergy

Re: Changing Seasons (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 10:12:41 PM AEST
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WOW!
This is such a beautiful write for being your first write. I love the change in seasons.
It's beautiful.
*S* Cynthia

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