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Array ( [sid] => 29933 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Blood Red Statement [time] => 2003-12-22 08:56:14 [hometext] => ................ [bodytext] => I watch my pain run,
From my pierced flesh,
A blood red statement of my grief,
Sit and watch it drip,
Onto my bed sheets,
And soak in, Dry.

A feeling of elation,
For a brief second of my life,
As I watch the glisten of my blood fade,
Does this end my pain?
Has my grief disappeared?
No.

It is right there,
I could point it out to you,
But would you look?
Would you will it away?
Or just hand me a new blade?

Back to today,
Sat where I was, Always,
My blood red statement dripping,
Tears flowing from my misty eyes,
Is this finally my release?

Willing for this to be this last time,
That I watch my blood stain my sheets,
Longing for my eyes,
To be forever closed,
This is my eternal dream,
Goodbye.
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A Blood Red Statement

Contributed by sweet-poison on Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 08:56:14 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I watch my pain run,
From my pierced flesh,
A blood red statement of my grief,
Sit and watch it drip,
Onto my bed sheets,
And soak in, Dry.

A feeling of elation,
For a brief second of my life,
As I watch the glisten of my blood fade,
Does this end my pain?
Has my grief disappeared?
No.

It is right there,
I could point it out to you,
But would you look?
Would you will it away?
Or just hand me a new blade?

Back to today,
Sat where I was, Always,
My blood red statement dripping,
Tears flowing from my misty eyes,
Is this finally my release?

Willing for this to be this last time,
That I watch my blood stain my sheets,
Longing for my eyes,
To be forever closed,
This is my eternal dream,
Goodbye.

Copyright © sweet-poison ... [ 2003-12-22 08:56:14]
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Re: A Blood Red Statement (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 04:30:32 PM AEST
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this is good.. im not sure whether you intended for 'Always' to have a capital A or not, but i like it like that.
charlotte x_x_x

Re: A Blood Red Statement (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:17:10 AM AEST
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I loved this I can relate to this so much and it saddens me that u are going through this as well. I hope that writing is a release for you more so than cutting is.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: A Blood Red Statement (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 02:21:40 PM AEST
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you described the scene very well! I really liked you poem. I hope to read more from you.

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