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And when we kiss it is like being hit by lighting.
You got me lost in the storm.
Touch me let me hold you.
Look into my eyes can you see my soul?
When I look into yours I can see forever.
On you the creator broke the mold.
I kiss your neck I just want to bite you.
Does that excite you?
I don't do it to hurt you but you taste like kiwi.
Touch me let me hold you. In my arms pull you close to me.
So warm time freezes.
Touch me let me into you no words can explain that truly but I will try.
What do you do to me morning don't come.
My mind and body become one.
My heart and soul fight for control.
It is hard to breathe I'm losing hold of reality.
Is this a dream touch me let me hold you take it slowly.
Show me your love touch me let me hold you......

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LET ME HOLD YOU

Contributed by LOST_KIDD on Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 11:55:45 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Every time I look at you my whole body just gets warm.
And when we kiss it is like being hit by lighting.
You got me lost in the storm.
Touch me let me hold you.
Look into my eyes can you see my soul?
When I look into yours I can see forever.
On you the creator broke the mold.
I kiss your neck I just want to bite you.
Does that excite you?
I don't do it to hurt you but you taste like kiwi.
Touch me let me hold you. In my arms pull you close to me.
So warm time freezes.
Touch me let me into you no words can explain that truly but I will try.
What do you do to me morning don't come.
My mind and body become one.
My heart and soul fight for control.
It is hard to breathe I'm losing hold of reality.
Is this a dream touch me let me hold you take it slowly.
Show me your love touch me let me hold you......

Copyright © LOST_KIDD ... [ 2003-12-21 23:55:45]
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Re: LET ME HOLD YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 01:20:15 AM AEST
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Such a tender write...loved this..
Jenni

Re: LET ME HOLD YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 02:57:39 PM AEST
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Personally I think your an odd bird. I like the style though it is very unique. Pretty good. I know the feelings of some of this. Very nice.

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