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Array ( [sid] => 29851 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bleeding Filth [time] => 2003-12-20 23:43:35 [hometext] => I'm actually talking to myself in this one. Mildly disturbing. [bodytext] => You are an open wound bleeding filth
Obscene in all your lies
Take one long look deep into my grave
Tell me you don’t recognize my face

You’re eating poison fruit under a falling tree
Trapped in your little web of evil dreams
With silver threads coiled around your neck
Choking on your very breath

Your voice is now your only company
Echoing off the dirty walls of your cell
Laugh, because there’s nothing else to do
Trapped here awaiting the end

You are an open wound bleeding filth
Obscene in all your lies
Take one long look deep into your grave
Tell me you still recognize your face

You’re drowning in a sea of weeping souls
Locked in the arms of evil memories
With blistered hands coiled around your neck
Choking on your very breath

You are the cause of your own demise
Don’t try to hide it with plastic smiles
I see you melting, fading

You are an open wound bleeding filth
Seeping into my very core
Tainting the claret wine pumping inside my veins

You are an open wound bleeding filth
Obscene in all your lies
Take one long look deep into my grave
Tell me you still recognize your face
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Bleeding Filth

Contributed by SinfullyTwisted on Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 11:43:35 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



You are an open wound bleeding filth
Obscene in all your lies
Take one long look deep into my grave
Tell me you don’t recognize my face

You’re eating poison fruit under a falling tree
Trapped in your little web of evil dreams
With silver threads coiled around your neck
Choking on your very breath

Your voice is now your only company
Echoing off the dirty walls of your cell
Laugh, because there’s nothing else to do
Trapped here awaiting the end

You are an open wound bleeding filth
Obscene in all your lies
Take one long look deep into your grave
Tell me you still recognize your face

You’re drowning in a sea of weeping souls
Locked in the arms of evil memories
With blistered hands coiled around your neck
Choking on your very breath

You are the cause of your own demise
Don’t try to hide it with plastic smiles
I see you melting, fading

You are an open wound bleeding filth
Seeping into my very core
Tainting the claret wine pumping inside my veins

You are an open wound bleeding filth
Obscene in all your lies
Take one long look deep into my grave
Tell me you still recognize your face




Copyright © SinfullyTwisted ... [ 2003-12-20 23:43:35]
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Re: Bleeding Filth (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 03:34:47 AM AEST
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MUST HAVE BEEN PRETTY MAD AT YOURSELF AT THAT MOMENT...WELL DONE ,GOOD WAY TO RELEASE THAT INNER DEMON WE CO EXSIST WITH.


Re: Bleeding Filth (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 05:59:54 AM AEST
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Tottally awesome!
Very strong and awesomely deep!
It's amazing 2 me and I get ddeeeepppp!
U get 2 thumbs!
peace, joy, luv,
emy
Happy holidays and thanks for sharing it!


Re: Bleeding Filth (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 06:13:24 AM AEST
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Excellent portrayal of self deprecation. Very strong imagery, as well.

On another note, I think this would make great lyrics for a song. It just has that musical feel to it.

Truly,
-V.S.


Re: Bleeding Filth (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 11:10:28 AM AEST
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Ooooh, dripping with beauty, i love it.. i agree that it would make good lyrics for a song..
charlotte x_x_x




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