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Array ( [sid] => 29833 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unexpected comments [time] => 2003-12-20 15:49:38 [hometext] => Once upon a time in Texas [bodytext] => Jo's driving the long road out of town
Car full of "Christmas Celebration"
She sees a Navajo woman
walking back to the reservation

Pulls over to offer her a lift
The Navajo was greatful
but to sit her in the front seat
they had to move a crate full

The Navajo stared intently
at the dozen bottles of "liquor"
She raised her eyebrows, looked at Jo
her sad eyes seemed to flicker

"I got them for my husband"
(Jo's explanation made)
the Navajo nodding slowly
said just two words
...........................
"good trade"

[comments] => 12 [counter] => 341 [topic] => 31 [informant] => wrybod [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )

Unexpected comments

Contributed by wrybod on Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 03:49:38 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

Jo's driving the long road out of town
Car full of "Christmas Celebration"
She sees a Navajo woman
walking back to the reservation

Pulls over to offer her a lift
The Navajo was greatful
but to sit her in the front seat
they had to move a crate full

The Navajo stared intently
at the dozen bottles of "liquor"
She raised her eyebrows, looked at Jo
her sad eyes seemed to flicker

"I got them for my husband"
(Jo's explanation made)
the Navajo nodding slowly
said just two words
...........................
"good trade"

Copyright © wrybod ... [ 2003-12-20 15:49:38]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Unexpected comments (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 04:04:11 PM AEST
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LOL tis very charming write my friend lol
Michelle

Re: Unexpected comments (User Rating: 1 )
by aernby on Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 05:09:54 PM AEST
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wrybod,

a little rye humor . . .

good write

aern+

Re: Unexpected comments (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 06:56:52 PM AEST
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well put
Shari

Re: Unexpected comments (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 07:11:47 PM AEST
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LOL ... dear wrybod ... thanks for the laugh this morning ... well written ... Jan

Re: Unexpected comments (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 11:26:39 PM AEST
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Thanks for the smile, My friend...
Jenni

Re: Unexpected comments (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 12:12:11 AM AEST
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Dear Bob,
What a funny funny poem. I think I might know why Jo exchanged all that booze for you.
Look at the terrible job you did when you were clearning the house and rumming too!
Hopefully she will get a maid that doesn't booze as much as you!
Great poem, mate
many laughs
ConSueMate

Re: Unexpected comments (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 03:39:53 AM AEST
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HA HA I LIKE THIS.

Re: Unexpected comments (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 04:14:08 AM AEST
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"good trade" its a humorous on 30 bottles..
woman knows other woman's intention..
welldone.. venkat

Re: Unexpected comments (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 08:23:48 AM AEST
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at first i thought this was going to be a sad one - but you fooled me lol - you have a great sense of humor. thanks for getting my day off with a chuckle.

merry

Re: Unexpected comments (User Rating: 1 )
by a_t0rtured_s0ul on Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 12:56:47 PM AEST
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lol...only in texas. good write.

Re: Unexpected comments (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 08:05:16 AM AEST
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roflmao! i love your mind hehe hugs n' love nessa

Re: Unexpected comments (User Rating: 1 )
by Jacktripper on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 12:54:00 PM AEST
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That's great.... Very good.. the rhyme scheme works to your benefit. It's like that camp ground story tale format. You have a very good sense of humor in your writtings I'd admire that. Very hard to write comedy...Great work..

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