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Array ( [sid] => 29814 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Forever Turned [time] => 2003-12-20 07:01:57 [hometext] => [bodytext] => as a sense of relief
fills inside of me
the bitter angriness
is released slowly

its calm now days
relaxtion is put to a test
a final sigh, a final breath
a hot and lonley day at rest

its over now
finished for good
however i'm not that happy
even though I know I should

the endless days are full
with so many things to do
however plans don't always work
plans don't always go through

its summer once again
I should be relieved now
but something's missing
i'm lost somewhere, somehow

i don't know how I feel
my world is forever turned
first its a short bliss
next its ferociously burned [comments] => 3 [counter] => 218 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Pompous [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Forever Turned

Contributed by Pompous on Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 07:01:57 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

as a sense of relief
fills inside of me
the bitter angriness
is released slowly

its calm now days
relaxtion is put to a test
a final sigh, a final breath
a hot and lonley day at rest

its over now
finished for good
however i'm not that happy
even though I know I should

the endless days are full
with so many things to do
however plans don't always work
plans don't always go through

its summer once again
I should be relieved now
but something's missing
i'm lost somewhere, somehow

i don't know how I feel
my world is forever turned
first its a short bliss
next its ferociously burned

Copyright © Pompous ... [ 2003-12-20 07:01:57]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Forever Turned (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 07:14:31 AM AEST
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it's good pompous. keep up the good work!:)

Re: Forever Turned (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 06:07:43 PM AEST
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I liked this rather simple and to the point but very good nonetheless. Keep it up!

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Forever Turned (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:00:28 AM AEST
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Very simple yet very complex. The way I could only wish to write. Great job. You are very talented.

Lindsey

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