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[aid] => mick
[title] => You have changed
[time] => 2002-08-29 12:03:54
[hometext] => This is about my friend and her new b/f. it may sound selfish but what this poem says is true..... plz make comments
[bodytext] => You have changed,
But I’m not sure how,
We used to be best friends,
But where has our time gone?
You have changed,
I’m not sure how,
You just have,
You talk but not about life,
About guys,
And about yourself,
You have changed,
Not in just one way,
You used to hang with me,
Now you hang with him,
What’s up with that,
You used hang out with not just me,
But all of your friends,
Now it’s just him you hang out with,
Where is are friendship,
It’s in the wind,
It’s just blown over,
Like the leaves,
Blown over in the night.
Where has your personality gone?
Is that in the wind too?
You don’t laugh as loud,
Like you used to,
It’s all about him and what he wants to do,
We make plans but you always hold off.
You’re going to the movies with him,
Or you have to wait because he’s going to call.
Yes, I know for a fact,
You have changed
[comments] => 14
[counter] => 336
[topic] => 16
[informant] => MnMnMsrcool
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 21
[ratings] => 5
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => FriendshipPoetry
)
You have changed
Contributed by
MnMnMsrcool
on
Thursday, 29th August 2002 @ 12:03:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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You have changed,
But I’m not sure how,
We used to be best friends,
But where has our time gone?
You have changed,
I’m not sure how,
You just have,
You talk but not about life,
About guys,
And about yourself,
You have changed,
Not in just one way,
You used to hang with me,
Now you hang with him,
What’s up with that,
You used hang out with not just me,
But all of your friends,
Now it’s just him you hang out with,
Where is are friendship,
It’s in the wind,
It’s just blown over,
Like the leaves,
Blown over in the night.
Where has your personality gone?
Is that in the wind too?
You don’t laugh as loud,
Like you used to,
It’s all about him and what he wants to do,
We make plans but you always hold off.
You’re going to the movies with him,
Or you have to wait because he’s going to call.
Yes, I know for a fact,
You have changed
Copyright ©
MnMnMsrcool
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2002-08-29 12:03:54]
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Re: You have changed
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 29th August 2002 @ 01:07:38 PM AEST
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Hi MMCool....nice poem...and it says a lot... but sometimes we need to give our best friends time for themselves..with their now love... We need to be unselfish....if we really care about them....
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Re: You have changed
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by MisterRight on
Thursday, 29th August 2002 @ 01:27:37 PM AEST
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I've had this happen with some of my friends as well. They find a new boy/girlfriend and the just seem to disappear. My advice is to give her a little time. She'll probably realize that she's not herself and that she's kind of "dropped" you and her other friends. If she doesn't come around, then you have every right to be angry and selfish. Have you talked to her about it? That may work too.
Great write.
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Re: You have changed
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by SeXyDrAgOn on
Thursday, 29th August 2002 @ 01:40:40 PM AEST
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All I have to say is blood is thicker than water right? and if you have a good friend, that's thick like blood man, and no guy or girl for that matter should come between a family/friendship. For the guys--->Bro's before Ho's For the girls-----> Chick's before Pricks!!
However... don't give up on a friendship because they are blind. Last year I lost my bestfriend to her boyfriend. 7 Months they dated, and about 3 months after they broke up we started to talk again, and now we're closer than ever, but if it would have lasted any longer, we wouldn't be friends today anymore. |
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Re: You have changed
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by SeXyDrAgOn on
Thursday, 29th August 2002 @ 01:41:52 PM AEST
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| Sorry, forgot the important part... Great poem, it really speaks the truth and Im sure its one that we can all relate to in some way... |
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Re: You have changed
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th August 2002 @ 03:22:35 PM AEST
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| I think almost everyone can relate to this one. Great write. I just encourage you to be patient. If it is like most bf's it is temporary and you need to be there to support your friend when the break up does come. But try to encourage your friend to hang out with you. Hang in there. |
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Re: You have changed
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th August 2002 @ 05:40:50 PM AEST
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| it is good, not |
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Re: You have changed
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by Smackmeplz24 on
Friday, 30th August 2002 @ 11:14:32 AM AEST
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| Dude myles everyone loves your poem great work!!! |
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Re: You have changed
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by MnMnMsrcool on
Friday, 20th September 2002 @ 11:19:20 AM AEST
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| thx! every1! thankyou for the good advice....it helped alot! thankyou so much! |
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Re: You have changed
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by ShadowsCloud on
Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 12:49:40 AM AEST
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Great poem. I can really relate to it.
ShadowsCloud |
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Re: You have changed
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by viola on
Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 02:26:56 PM AEST
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| great thoughts. Don't worry, if I know guys she'll be crying to you soon. Hang in and give love, it's you she'll remember. |
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Re: You have changed
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by yellow_sundragon on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 09:40:06 PM AEST
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I understand what your saying, and it isn't selfish. It's too bad that your friend doesn't realize how bad this is for her. Because if her boyfriend ever hurts her, she's going to have nothing to live for.
Beautiful write, my dear.
YS |
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Re: You have changed
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by etherealgurl on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 06:25:43 PM AEST
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| first, let me say this is a pretty good poem...then, let me say I've been on both sides of that, but the friendships always seem to survive if they are true friendships....It's hard, but sometimes, we've got to give our friends space...that's why it good to have more than just one best friend, so to speak, |
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Re: You have changed
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by Kirby on
Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 06:01:39 PM AEST
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| I know exactly what you were going through when you wrote this poem becasue I am in that situation right now and then you get over it so keep in there and be strong. Nice poem anyways! Love:::Kirby |
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Re: You have changed
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by JonDgreat on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 06:55:14 PM AEST
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| Yeah I exactly feel you in this poem. It's so hard when she does change, especially when another guy is responcible for the changing, but forget about her. Don't make the same mistake I did and dwell on the past. People tell me "wow your writing is great!!", like i am trying to say to you. But you would probably say what I would say, "yeah but I sure went through alot of hell to write it." so yeah hang in there, and remember that she's missing out, and something better is yet to come. The hardest thing to say is good bye, but sometimes it's the best. |
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