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Array ( [sid] => 29752 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Your Love Is Weak [time] => 2003-12-19 14:28:09 [hometext] => I can do nothing with your love... [bodytext] => I'll smother you with kisses and then smother you in anger
With a pillow to your face and then I'll lock you in the hanger
To dry and fall apart just like my insides
Rot and decay to my abandoned heart cries
Did you not think that I would find out?
Its all I can do to refrain from shouts
I really thought that you loved me
But all you wanted to do was leave me
Your love is weak - Your love is useless
Your love is bleak - Your love is S***


You did this to me
Why is it so hard to believe?

With your insides in a jar I can make your beauty last
And try to forget how you damaged me in the past
Look into my eye and tell me what you see
A plague, a curse, am I your living disease?
I wanted to be with you
But now there is no use
You ripped away my heart
And with this pain its so hard to start...
You stopped me - You hurt me
You contorted me - You enraged ME


You did this to me
Why is it so hard to believe?

MY CHEST ***** ACHES - I feel so...
MY CHEST ***** ACHES - I feel so wronged

Hold back your lies - Hold back your lies
Its pitiful the way you cry
Hold back your lies - Hold back your lies
Before the respect for you dies
Hold back your lies - Hold back your lies
Its pitiful the way you cry
Hold back your lies - Hold back your lies
ONE MORE I SWEAR YOU'LL ***** DIE
HOLD BACK YOUR LIES - HOLD BACK YOUR LIES
ITS PITIFUL THE WAY YOU CRY
HOLD BACK YOUR LIES - HOLD BACK YOUR LIES
BEFORE THE RESPECT FOR YOU DIES
HOLD BACK YOUR LIES - HOLD BACK YOUR LIES
ITS PITIFUL THE WAY YOU CRY
HOLD BACK YOUR LIES - HOLD BACK YOUR LIES
I SWEAR TO GOD YOU'RE GONNA ***** DIE

You did this to me
Why is it so hard to believe?

I warned you, my love
There's nothing left to do, but put you up
On the shelf, in the jars
I'll see you in hell, its not that far...
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Your Love Is Weak

Contributed by sicknivesevered on Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 02:28:09 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems



I'll smother you with kisses and then smother you in anger
With a pillow to your face and then I'll lock you in the hanger
To dry and fall apart just like my insides
Rot and decay to my abandoned heart cries
Did you not think that I would find out?
Its all I can do to refrain from shouts
I really thought that you loved me
But all you wanted to do was leave me
Your love is weak - Your love is useless
Your love is bleak - Your love is S***


You did this to me
Why is it so hard to believe?

With your insides in a jar I can make your beauty last
And try to forget how you damaged me in the past
Look into my eye and tell me what you see
A plague, a curse, am I your living disease?
I wanted to be with you
But now there is no use
You ripped away my heart
And with this pain its so hard to start...
You stopped me - You hurt me
You contorted me - You enraged ME


You did this to me
Why is it so hard to believe?

MY CHEST ***** ACHES - I feel so...
MY CHEST ***** ACHES - I feel so wronged

Hold back your lies - Hold back your lies
Its pitiful the way you cry
Hold back your lies - Hold back your lies
Before the respect for you dies
Hold back your lies - Hold back your lies
Its pitiful the way you cry
Hold back your lies - Hold back your lies
ONE MORE I SWEAR YOU'LL ***** DIE
HOLD BACK YOUR LIES - HOLD BACK YOUR LIES
ITS PITIFUL THE WAY YOU CRY
HOLD BACK YOUR LIES - HOLD BACK YOUR LIES
BEFORE THE RESPECT FOR YOU DIES
HOLD BACK YOUR LIES - HOLD BACK YOUR LIES
ITS PITIFUL THE WAY YOU CRY
HOLD BACK YOUR LIES - HOLD BACK YOUR LIES
I SWEAR TO GOD YOU'RE GONNA ***** DIE

You did this to me
Why is it so hard to believe?

I warned you, my love
There's nothing left to do, but put you up
On the shelf, in the jars
I'll see you in hell, its not that far...




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Re: Your Love Is Weak (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 05:29:32 PM AEST
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really REALLY good work........why is it so hard to believe......yes!!!!!


Re: Your Love Is Weak (User Rating: 1 )
by XxNights_ChildxX on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 03:02:25 PM AEST
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wow, great write, the hate that radiates from this is marvelous, very strong, crimson told me u 2 went 2 skool tagether and to read ur stuff so indeed this is what i am doing, ell im off 2 read the rest!




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