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[sid] => 29749
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => one song too long
[time] => 2003-12-19 14:14:00
[hometext] => i wrote this poem in regards to my band the joint cheifs of staff, and the quality of our music at that particular time.
[bodytext] => Our music lacks structure Far too repetitive it seems The same damn chord progressions Make my fingers want to scream We need to change it up Slip into something new No style bounds our limits This fact remains still true What about a bass solo I’m sure that’ll do fine No, that is not the answer We need to control our time But I love to jam To keep going on one song I realize it’s the same For far too long So let’s restructure each part Make them perfect thru and thru We need to do this together A challenge I leave for me and you [comments] => 0 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 59 [informant] => shang [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )
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