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Array ( [sid] => 29729 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Please Approve [time] => 2003-12-19 03:10:40 [hometext] => To be in your beloveds arms in death is bliss. [bodytext] => Sleepless I turn to thee ,
Restless I feel within.
Blankness has crept in me ,
The more I dwell ,
more empty I feel within .

I know the route is circuituous ,
Incidents tumultuous.
Do I care to feel for you?
You loved and cared ,
Here Iam ready to tear you.

Ruthless I was not ,
A change of heart is what I got.
I tried hard to dissuade ,
Pushed it hard to evade .
Tried ,tried ,Oh! I tried my best ,
Yet I failed to suppress .

I battled for you inside me ,
Hard I tried to conquer me,
Yet I lost ,
And I lost me.
I lost your prized possession ,
Whom you had always loved it seems.

It withered ,it decayed to deflect.
Your love I scorned ,
You will believe so.
Iam worthy of contempt
And not to be adored.

But tell me ,
Tell me just for once,
What do I do ,
When I face my soul by chance.
The smile , the eyes ,
I searched so long ,
The look , the depth
I yearned till now.


The longing to laugh together ,
The way I want.
What ,Oh! Please tell me ,
What do I do?
If my desires get together and haunt.

In you I searched ,
I found him not.
I tried to make you him ,
I could not.
Now that I have found him
Mine he is still not.
And shall not be ,
I know this too.

I pledge ,
I shall forever be with you.
But do grant me just one wish
And hence will never ask for more .
To live ,I will live with you
But will die in his arms
I request , please approve.
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 241 [topic] => 24 [informant] => bhavnas [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
Please Approve

Contributed by bhavnas on Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 03:10:40 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



Sleepless I turn to thee ,
Restless I feel within.
Blankness has crept in me ,
The more I dwell ,
more empty I feel within .

I know the route is circuituous ,
Incidents tumultuous.
Do I care to feel for you?
You loved and cared ,
Here Iam ready to tear you.

Ruthless I was not ,
A change of heart is what I got.
I tried hard to dissuade ,
Pushed it hard to evade .
Tried ,tried ,Oh! I tried my best ,
Yet I failed to suppress .

I battled for you inside me ,
Hard I tried to conquer me,
Yet I lost ,
And I lost me.
I lost your prized possession ,
Whom you had always loved it seems.

It withered ,it decayed to deflect.
Your love I scorned ,
You will believe so.
Iam worthy of contempt
And not to be adored.

But tell me ,
Tell me just for once,
What do I do ,
When I face my soul by chance.
The smile , the eyes ,
I searched so long ,
The look , the depth
I yearned till now.


The longing to laugh together ,
The way I want.
What ,Oh! Please tell me ,
What do I do?
If my desires get together and haunt.

In you I searched ,
I found him not.
I tried to make you him ,
I could not.
Now that I have found him
Mine he is still not.
And shall not be ,
I know this too.

I pledge ,
I shall forever be with you.
But do grant me just one wish
And hence will never ask for more .
To live ,I will live with you
But will die in his arms
I request , please approve.




Copyright © bhavnas ... [ 2003-12-19 03:10:40]
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Re: Please Approve (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 03:54:18 AM AEST
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Good flow..keep them coming on. venkat


Re: Please Approve (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 03:55:03 AM AEST
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oh my goodness.....you had me step into my world had i made a different choice........wow......i found him not.......yes!!!


Re: Please Approve (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 11:21:45 PM AEST
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Wow what a write! It got to me. Was extrememly awesome. All the best.

Emma.


Re: Please Approve (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 10:00:21 AM AEST
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Whoa... I don't even know what to say.... Very good is all I can think sadly.


Re: Please Approve (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 11:53:41 PM AEST
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How sad not to be with the one you truly love but to have to find love for the one you are with,or at least a mutual understanding. I can only hope this is just a poem and not a truth in your life.

Rainbows,
Rita




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