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but your cold lifeless eyes will only see right through to my spine
There is a darkness in you that the night envies.
I can almost feel the bitterness that radiates from your body.
You are for me and it makes me afraid, afraid that i will always be this way.
but worse I'm afraid that I'll end up like you.
So look deeper into what you claim is empty space.
Try to see my beating heart for what it really is.
and there's a change of expression on your face.
You'll deny it and ask if my heart really exists.
(it does and now i know that yours does too)
cause there was that second when i saw your soul. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 236 [topic] => 25 [informant] => fallensilence [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

the look

Contributed by fallensilence on Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 12:48:44 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

I'll stab a hole in my lungs to show you my heart,
but your cold lifeless eyes will only see right through to my spine
There is a darkness in you that the night envies.
I can almost feel the bitterness that radiates from your body.
You are for me and it makes me afraid, afraid that i will always be this way.
but worse I'm afraid that I'll end up like you.
So look deeper into what you claim is empty space.
Try to see my beating heart for what it really is.
and there's a change of expression on your face.
You'll deny it and ask if my heart really exists.
(it does and now i know that yours does too)
cause there was that second when i saw your soul.

Copyright © fallensilence ... [ 2003-12-19 00:48:44]
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Re: the look (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 01:02:40 AM AEST
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Sad but good work!
peace, joy, luv,
emy

Re: the look (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 01:37:10 AM AEST
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this is a sad but very true write.. sometimes we can love someone and they can turn us.. we are afraid of becoming like them.. and after you are with someone for so long they become part of you as you become part of them.. awesomely captured into words... another awesome write by you

peace joy and hope
JENNA

Re: the look (User Rating: 1 )
by bhavnas on Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 05:42:40 AM AEST
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to love and be loved by the same person is a blissful feeling but is rare....this is sad but it would have been equally difficult for the other person too ...wonderfully written emotions.

Re: the look (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 09:48:44 AM AEST
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beautifully expressed as always. you wear your heart on your pen David :P hope all is well with you. love Kate xx

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