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[aid] => mick
[title] => Hell
[time] => 2003-12-18 23:44:41
[hometext] => I wrote this in my english class... And yes it is posted on Poetry.com, I just wanted feed back on it.
[bodytext] => Watching the clock move, with each tick my sanity slips. Reaching into darkness, grasping for anything. Sliding through the tunnel, Hoping to survive. Running towards the small light, only never moving forward. Tears fill my eyes as i realize i will never escape this hell. I sink into the floor and curl into a ball, wallowing in my shame. A sudden light shines upon me, as I open my eyes it slips away. I shut them again as tears slide. As the bell rings in class I gather my things and leave, and though I move to different rooms, My mind stays blank, having thoughts of death and darkness pummeled into my brain. Walking silently along the hall looking slightly confused, getting stares from other students, I do not care. For I am still in my box, the space I call my own. I cannot escape this horrid place, no matter that I try. Alone I crouch, Alone I sigh, Ever alone I cry. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 289 [topic] => 36 [informant] => SadnessPrevails [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
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