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Old alliances fade and loyalty is torched,
And in these times all words are weightless,
Instead of friends you've found your haters.

I turned around too late to know,
You stabbed my back, stooped so low,
To turn things around, I tried to do,
But everything else was up to you.

Too bad I've been forgotten,
It's a shame I've been pushed out of place,
These people whom I grew up with,
Refuse to remember my face.

So as I leave on this traceless track,
I've felt the last of your attack,
For in my past you will remain,
But in my future you will never see me again. [comments] => 10 [counter] => 382 [topic] => 6 [informant] => blueheart [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

When Friendship Dies

Contributed by blueheart on Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 10:01:18 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

There comes a time when friendship is lost,
Old alliances fade and loyalty is torched,
And in these times all words are weightless,
Instead of friends you've found your haters.

I turned around too late to know,
You stabbed my back, stooped so low,
To turn things around, I tried to do,
But everything else was up to you.

Too bad I've been forgotten,
It's a shame I've been pushed out of place,
These people whom I grew up with,
Refuse to remember my face.

So as I leave on this traceless track,
I've felt the last of your attack,
For in my past you will remain,
But in my future you will never see me again.

Copyright © blueheart ... [ 2003-12-18 22:01:18]
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Re: When Friendship Dies (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 10:22:58 PM AEST
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NICE WRITE... I went through this recently too but I think I chose a less tactful approach when I put it to poetry... this is good!!

Re: When Friendship Dies (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 12:35:43 AM AEST
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Excellent wrting!
It's sad but sometimes it happens. I've had these feelings from time to time.
Keep up the great writing!
peace, joy, luv,
emy

Re: When Friendship Dies (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 11:30:47 PM AEST
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Oh wow! I went throught this! Hypocrites alright! Makes me so angry. Your write is so true for me! Every word! Hopefully even the last two lines, as I was so upset and then so furious and then numb and now I just hate...not a good way to go, but hey it's life right and they aren't worthy of being called friends. Excellent write. I hope all the best for you because I know how hard ths is to go through, don't give in. Let me know how things go.

Emma.

Re: When Friendship Dies (User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 11:14:57 AM AEST
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It's just so sad to know that sometimes our very true friends are great hypocrites... Well, good write over here :-)

Re: When Friendship Dies (User Rating: 1 )
by a_t0rtured_s0ul on Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:52:03 AM AEST
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loved it. we all have these friends.

Re: When Friendship Dies (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 11:04:42 PM AEST
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yes yes yes.....Written to perfection my friend.

Well done
Larry

Re: When Friendship Dies (User Rating: 1 )
by chandramohan on Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 03:32:04 AM AEST
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well said.
wish u all happiness in the new year.
chandramohan...

Re: When Friendship Dies (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 10:29:07 AM AEST
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Ah, another fellow countryman (or countrywoman)...what a well-written poem...I have had these kind of friends too and written about them but it never came out as well as your poem here. Good work!

Re: When Friendship Dies (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 06:07:48 AM AEST
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excellent, written beautifully!! i hope you feel better now, its always sad but good on you! their loss not yours! hugs n' love nessa

Re: When Friendship Dies (User Rating: 1 )
by mercedes on Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 11:10:03 AM AEST
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You are right blueheart, it sums it up pretty well. I should of read this sooner, thanks for pointing it out to me.

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