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Array ( [sid] => 29702 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => will they listen to me [time] => 2003-12-18 20:00:45 [hometext] => when i feel no one here, i feel my voices erase. [bodytext] => i try to call
but my voice starts to fall
in my grave with pain
i talk to hear a name
like a ghost in smoke
Im clear like wind
through the trough
looking in the mirror
im not there
looking for answers
but not heard like cancer
i touch their hands but they can't feel me

blind from the beast
who trys to entrap me
the cold on my shoulder
goes through my sweater
walking to the casket, in it is me
how could it be
when im feeling free
how soon will i be
in days my life will just end
so i write all word's in pen
on the desk my chest starts
to break
the feeling on my neck
shows a deadly reflect
my momma grieves me and won't let me fall
hit hard in my belly, i breathe through god [comments] => 1 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 48 [informant] => mista7 [notes] => (edited for spelling by mod 7) [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

will they listen to me

Contributed by mista7 on Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 08:00:45 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

i try to call
but my voice starts to fall
in my grave with pain
i talk to hear a name
like a ghost in smoke
Im clear like wind
through the trough
looking in the mirror
im not there
looking for answers
but not heard like cancer
i touch their hands but they can't feel me

blind from the beast
who trys to entrap me
the cold on my shoulder
goes through my sweater
walking to the casket, in it is me
how could it be
when im feeling free
how soon will i be
in days my life will just end
so i write all word's in pen
on the desk my chest starts
to break
the feeling on my neck
shows a deadly reflect
my momma grieves me and won't let me fall
hit hard in my belly, i breathe through god

Copyright © mista7 ... [ 2003-12-18 20:00:45]
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Re: will they listen to me (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 07:23:12 PM AEST
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It is very hard when you feel like no one is listening. I hope you find strength to get thru this.

Enjoyed your poem.

Kie

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