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Array ( [sid] => 29698 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Please, forgive me , my Heart [time] => 2003-12-18 19:09:11 [hometext] => this poem is meant word by word,.. cos it really happened so [bodytext] => One day I wrote my poem "Swan"
the other day it happened so
The swan I let her die
and I was also taken down

I betrayed you, my heart
I did not listen, you warned and
I paid, for I was badly hurt
I believed to a friend, but not you

So many times you gave me sign
so many times I heard you cry
so many times I thought it can´t be true
Now I am crying, for I betrayed you...

Forgive me, please
forgive silly me
So now I know, 100%-ly,
the only one I can trust, is YOU,
YOU, my own HEART,YOU
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Please, forgive me , my Heart

Contributed by Aika on Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 07:09:11 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

One day I wrote my poem "Swan"
the other day it happened so
The swan I let her die
and I was also taken down

I betrayed you, my heart
I did not listen, you warned and
I paid, for I was badly hurt
I believed to a friend, but not you

So many times you gave me sign
so many times I heard you cry
so many times I thought it can´t be true
Now I am crying, for I betrayed you...

Forgive me, please
forgive silly me
So now I know, 100%-ly,
the only one I can trust, is YOU,
YOU, my own HEART,YOU

Copyright Â© Aika ... [ 2003-12-18 19:09:11]
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Re: Please, forgive me , my Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 11:52:57 PM AEST
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Very nice and emotional.

Re: Please, forgive me , my Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 11:26:08 PM AEST
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Beautiful! If only! I wish I could also follow the point in this write as you are...for it is such a good point. Excellent write. All the best.

Emma.

Re: Please, forgive me , my Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 12:22:31 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem Aika....but I'm alittle lost too!
Are you saying the only one you can trust is your own heart?
Lovely poem...just missed something in there...I don't understand.
Love you,
ConSue

Re: Please, forgive me , my Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by jeanie on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 05:20:50 PM AEST
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well, that's it, you never know what to believe...but, you know, as long as you decide according to what you consider right and true, then you can't go wrong even when you mistake, coz your intention's what counts! and I would never, but never, dare to doubt that yours was pure and good! :))

jeanie

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