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Array ( [sid] => 29664 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => in your eyes [time] => 2003-12-18 12:49:07 [hometext] => spelling is so bad i know [bodytext] => your sitting their
in your terotry your chair
fixing me with that icy stair
trying to degrade me with your eyes
i wish the light would just switch of so it could be night
then maybe you wouldnt see
my chair rocking as i let you embarres me
just to save myself a scrap of dignity
why do i let you see
give you permission to stare at my face
why do i let myself be taken to this place
your weak
your the one who's insecure
confidence is my cure
im not perfect
but im not to bad
hear ehat im saying is it driving you mad?
my spelling is beyond crap
but im not going to take you back
because i dont need you
im not living through your eyes im living through the truth [comments] => 2 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 6 [informant] => loopylou [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

in your eyes

Contributed by loopylou on Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 12:49:07 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

your sitting their
in your terotry your chair
fixing me with that icy stair
trying to degrade me with your eyes
i wish the light would just switch of so it could be night
then maybe you wouldnt see
my chair rocking as i let you embarres me
just to save myself a scrap of dignity
why do i let you see
give you permission to stare at my face
why do i let myself be taken to this place
your weak
your the one who's insecure
confidence is my cure
im not perfect
but im not to bad
hear ehat im saying is it driving you mad?
my spelling is beyond crap
but im not going to take you back
because i dont need you
im not living through your eyes im living through the truth

Copyright © loopylou ... [ 2003-12-18 12:49:07]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: in your eyes (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 01:47:28 PM AEST
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well your spelling may be a bit off, but let me tell ya, your feelings came through perfectly. You have a talent, dont be shy, have the moderators help. They have to fix mine all the time :oP

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Re: in your eyes (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 02:17:41 AM AEST
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Once again, Loupylou...I never meant to embarass you. I am sorry.
The Spelling Bee

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