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Saw this star come crashing through

So suddenly blinded
And reminded of you

Heat swells up my legs
Pupils begin to contract

Blowing up the sky of darkness
Acquiring all I used to lack

Saw this star crash on through
And squinted into the amazing light

The beauty overwhelming
The sky bleeds black tonight

Losing all my hopes for difference
Imagining you take away the pain

I'm lost in this beautiful disaster
Waiting for everything left to gain

Another page down in memory
Address this feeling to you

I love the way I feel on this rooftop
As this star comes crashing through [comments] => 6 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 54 [informant] => Exodus-On-Life [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => happypoetry )

The Star The Broke The Sky

Contributed by Exodus-On-Life on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 05:02:05 PM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry

Perspective from the rooftop
Saw this star come crashing through

So suddenly blinded
And reminded of you

Heat swells up my legs
Pupils begin to contract

Blowing up the sky of darkness
Acquiring all I used to lack

Saw this star crash on through
And squinted into the amazing light

The beauty overwhelming
The sky bleeds black tonight

Losing all my hopes for difference
Imagining you take away the pain

I'm lost in this beautiful disaster
Waiting for everything left to gain

Another page down in memory
Address this feeling to you

I love the way I feel on this rooftop
As this star comes crashing through

Copyright © Exodus-On-Life ... [ 2003-12-17 17:02:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Star The Broke The Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by MissLee on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 05:09:46 PM AEST
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Very nice dear, know the feeling.

Re: The Star The Broke The Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 05:09:48 PM AEST
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i love the thought of this
very well done

michelle

Re: The Star The Broke The Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 05:15:34 PM AEST
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I very much love the title. Arg. It makes me mad that I didn't come up with it. Oh well, excellent write.

Re: The Star The Broke The Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 09:38:35 PM AEST
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This is neat..makes a person's mind work

Re: The Star The Broke The Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 09:49:38 PM AEST
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"The sky bleeds black tonight" - love that line! Thought provoking write. I love the way you worded it. Thanks for the great read!

~ Moonlit

Re: The Star The Broke The Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 10:19:20 PM AEST
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Very unique, one of a kind. I loved the wording and the imagination I found while reading it.

Kie

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