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Array ( [sid] => 29587 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Lurid Trial [time] => 2003-12-17 16:38:29 [hometext] => Hrmm... [bodytext] => Crashing to the ground...
AWAKEN!

Regaining my consciousness I first noticed the ground
Soot spread across the foundation
Black bricks laid across in a maze - silver pebbles scattered in no formation
I felt ill as my eyes rose to the sky and saw the magistrate there
It looked upon me with disgust and its words carried through the air way too clear

FOLLOW ME, PATHETIC ONE
WE WILL JUDGE YOU FOR WHAT YOU HAVE DONE
TO THE CHAMBER OF BRIGHT GOLD
WE WILL SEE WHAT UNFOLDS


I trailed the being in freezing fright - Finding there was nothing else around me
We walked on and on, seemingly no where - As I became exhausted and weary
Suddenly, it spun around and struck me to my knees with its eyeless gaze
Light bloomed - I was in a shell of gold, brightly beating me with its blistering blaze

My eyes dripped as I pried them open to see what wonder laid before me
A tribunal formed of five stared at me as the sickest disease
I sunk into a prison, invisible but I could feel it there
Once again the cloaked figure's speech speared my ears way too clear

WHAT JUSTIFIES WHAT YOU HAVE DONE?
SPEAK IT NOW IN OUR HOLLOW SUN
THIS IS YOUR CHANCE TO SELL YOUR PEACE
IF YOU ARE TRUE YOU WILL BE RELEASED


My mind skipped and shot from thought to thought, trying to form instead of blotch
I tried to scream I had no choice, but the stench of my sin choked my voice
Don't take my life! Don't take my life! Don't take my life! Don't take my life...

LIFE IS PRECIOUS, BUT YOUR MANNERISMS ARE SICK
I BELIEVE THERE ARE JUST REASONS TO THROW YOU IN THE PIT


And then I felt my soul searched...

thoughts of thoughtlessness - lack of respect
destroyer of dreams - recorded screams
dying of ectasy - severed unity
blood has been shed - an ill-chosen bed
BRUISED, BASHED - BROKE, GASHED
lying in shame - unbearable pain
brooding, hurting - crying, dying
wanting nothing - only ending...
You're evil...

That sounds too familiar...

Wait, that wasn't me - That can't be me
Don't show me that s*** - I didn't do it!
I swear, I swear to God!
Can't you see thats a path on which I did not trod!?

THE VERDICT HAS BEEN REACHED
NOW, RISE UP AND MEET YOUR JUDGEMENT


Rising to the sky...
GUILTY!

I felt like I had been raped
But there was no escape
And then I felt my soul stripped...
And everything went black
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The Lurid Trial

Contributed by sicknivesevered on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 04:38:29 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems



Crashing to the ground...
AWAKEN!

Regaining my consciousness I first noticed the ground
Soot spread across the foundation
Black bricks laid across in a maze - silver pebbles scattered in no formation
I felt ill as my eyes rose to the sky and saw the magistrate there
It looked upon me with disgust and its words carried through the air way too clear

FOLLOW ME, PATHETIC ONE
WE WILL JUDGE YOU FOR WHAT YOU HAVE DONE
TO THE CHAMBER OF BRIGHT GOLD
WE WILL SEE WHAT UNFOLDS


I trailed the being in freezing fright - Finding there was nothing else around me
We walked on and on, seemingly no where - As I became exhausted and weary
Suddenly, it spun around and struck me to my knees with its eyeless gaze
Light bloomed - I was in a shell of gold, brightly beating me with its blistering blaze

My eyes dripped as I pried them open to see what wonder laid before me
A tribunal formed of five stared at me as the sickest disease
I sunk into a prison, invisible but I could feel it there
Once again the cloaked figure's speech speared my ears way too clear

WHAT JUSTIFIES WHAT YOU HAVE DONE?
SPEAK IT NOW IN OUR HOLLOW SUN
THIS IS YOUR CHANCE TO SELL YOUR PEACE
IF YOU ARE TRUE YOU WILL BE RELEASED


My mind skipped and shot from thought to thought, trying to form instead of blotch
I tried to scream I had no choice, but the stench of my sin choked my voice
Don't take my life! Don't take my life! Don't take my life! Don't take my life...

LIFE IS PRECIOUS, BUT YOUR MANNERISMS ARE SICK
I BELIEVE THERE ARE JUST REASONS TO THROW YOU IN THE PIT


And then I felt my soul searched...

thoughts of thoughtlessness - lack of respect
destroyer of dreams - recorded screams
dying of ectasy - severed unity
blood has been shed - an ill-chosen bed
BRUISED, BASHED - BROKE, GASHED
lying in shame - unbearable pain
brooding, hurting - crying, dying
wanting nothing - only ending...
You're evil...

That sounds too familiar...

Wait, that wasn't me - That can't be me
Don't show me that s*** - I didn't do it!
I swear, I swear to God!
Can't you see thats a path on which I did not trod!?

THE VERDICT HAS BEEN REACHED
NOW, RISE UP AND MEET YOUR JUDGEMENT


Rising to the sky...
GUILTY!

I felt like I had been raped
But there was no escape
And then I felt my soul stripped...
And everything went black




Copyright © sicknivesevered ... [ 2003-12-17 16:38:29]
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Re: The Lurid Trial (User Rating: 1 )
by MissLee on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 04:50:04 PM AEST
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WOW, very ingaging write, you had me on the edge of my seat, that was AWESOME, keep up the good work!


Re: The Lurid Trial (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 05:06:23 PM AEST
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as always.......you incite emotion..........


Re: The Lurid Trial (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 05:38:11 PM AEST
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emotions is right wow i couldnt do anything but keep reading


michelle


Re: The Lurid Trial (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 10:10:01 PM AEST
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riveting...


Re: The Lurid Trial (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 11:37:12 PM AEST
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....Wow interesting write. I really liked this.


Re: The Lurid Trial (User Rating: 1 )
by Jacquelynne on Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 10:14:48 AM AEST
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Interesting, love you.




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