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I’m not ready to say goodbye
Maybe it is selfish
But to let go I have tried
So grandpa please don’t leave me
Alone here to cry
Grandpa believe me
I’m not ready for goodbye

Grandpa why’d you leave me
I wasn’t ready for goodbye
I know that it’s selfish
But know that I have tried
So grandpa why’d you leave me
In my pain to cry
Grandpa believe me
I wasn’t ready for goodbye

Grandpa can you hear me?
I need to say goodbye
I know I was selfish
But i’ve seen it through your eyes
So grandpa can you hear me?
Alone I sit and cry
Grandpa believe me
It’s hard........I say goodbye [comments] => 3 [counter] => 720 [topic] => 39 [informant] => irshprnss [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Grandpa can you hear me?

Contributed by irshprnss on Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 08:05:06 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Grandpa please don’t leave me
I’m not ready to say goodbye
Maybe it is selfish
But to let go I have tried
So grandpa please don’t leave me
Alone here to cry
Grandpa believe me
I’m not ready for goodbye

Grandpa why’d you leave me
I wasn’t ready for goodbye
I know that it’s selfish
But know that I have tried
So grandpa why’d you leave me
In my pain to cry
Grandpa believe me
I wasn’t ready for goodbye

Grandpa can you hear me?
I need to say goodbye
I know I was selfish
But i’ve seen it through your eyes
So grandpa can you hear me?
Alone I sit and cry
Grandpa believe me
It’s hard........I say goodbye

Copyright Â© irshprnss ... [ 2003-12-16 20:05:06]
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Re: Grandpa can you hear me? (User Rating: 1 )
by olive on Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 10:10:45 PM AEST
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I recently lost a grandparent too.....my sympathies....but, as I see it, pain is often good for poetry. Hope you feel better soon. Best Wishes~olive

Re: Grandpa can you hear me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 12:09:38 AM AEST
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This is really touching and so sad. I'm sorry for your loss...Stay strong....your Grandpa would have wanted you to...
My thoughts are with you and your family..
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Grandpa can you hear me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 06:46:37 PM AEST
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I'm sorry for this. I hope things get better soon. It was beautifuly written. Great write regaurdless of the loss.

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