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Array ( [sid] => 29524 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => FIRST STEPS [time] => 2003-12-16 18:54:28 [hometext] => ......the realization that life goes on after a loss can be so much more painful than the loss itself.......... [bodytext] => rainy day
can't feel the cold
don't hear them say
all that's being told
so many nervous smiles
uncontrollable tears
some crossed wearied miles
others instilled hidden fears
the sun did not shine
a broken ground in white
everyone says it'll be fine
i just want out of their sight
turn your head and see
a gamble from the heart
all you have to do is breath
she gave you a brand new start........... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 230 [topic] => 6 [informant] => jaeann [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

FIRST STEPS

Contributed by jaeann on Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 06:54:28 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

rainy day
can't feel the cold
don't hear them say
all that's being told
so many nervous smiles
uncontrollable tears
some crossed wearied miles
others instilled hidden fears
the sun did not shine
a broken ground in white
everyone says it'll be fine
i just want out of their sight
turn your head and see
a gamble from the heart
all you have to do is breath
she gave you a brand new start...........

Copyright © jaeann ... [ 2003-12-16 18:54:28]
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Re: FIRST STEPS (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 08:01:41 PM AEST
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wow very good I can relate to this much. Short and to the point loved it all including the intro thing.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: FIRST STEPS (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 10:59:36 AM AEST
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dearest jaeann, your right, we cannot get over it, but with preserverance get through it, much love n' hugs, merry christmas to you, nessa

Re: FIRST STEPS (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 05:53:28 PM AEST
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I am so sorry jaeann.
The loss for anything is painful.
This must have been a really sad write for you.
Again, I'm sorry for your loss.
*S* Cynthia

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