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If I were God
Contributed by
SuicidalSon
on
Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 09:33:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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If I were God, would you pray to Me
like to the One you do
Probably not, although I'd make you free
unlike the One you knew
If I were God I would change this land
for each and all of you
If I were God I wouldn't want your hand
and there would be no pew
If I were God would you believe
or would you go irate
If I were God there'd be no grief
or no reason to hate
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Do you see my point?
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I'm disgraced by the thought of One
If I were God we'd all have fun
We wouldn't be what we've become
And no-one would have been created dumb
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Now look at the real Man
Why should we pray
I don't think He gives a damn
He leads us to decay
Take it from the Son I am
My Suicidal ways
I think God is just a scam
Lets change our biblical days
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2003-12-16 09:33:15]
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Re: If I were God
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by yellow_sundragon on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 05:52:05 PM AEST
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Cudos! I agree! Another good one... though read a little late...
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Re: If I were God
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by sunnyrainbows on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 08:02:33 PM AEST
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patience.......
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Re: If I were God
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by colinbaker62 on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 06:19:36 PM AEST
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Hi.. I've just read several of your poems but can't quite decide what your underlying message is supposed to be. Are you arguing that Heaven and Hell are misnomers? I get the feeling you are arguing that Heaven and Hell are in the here and now. I would agree with that alright. Religion for me is a philosophy which has historically evolved and transformed in a qualitative manner as social history has developed.
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Re: If I were God
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by inoc on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 06:46:14 PM AEST
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....I wont go on about what I belive, but everyone has a choice...
"ditto... patience...."
coni
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