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Array ( [sid] => 29392 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The hurting will stop now [time] => 2003-12-15 01:15:24 [hometext] => I hurt [bodytext] => It would be so easy to make it all go away
I haven't felt this hurt since I was little
Why didn't I do it then, I wouldn't feel this now.

It would have been so much easier then
I would have just remembered the taunting
Then with the click of a trigger, no more hurt.

I didn't do it then because I imagined there was something to live for
It was all a trick of the mind
I see the truth now.

I am what there is to live for
That is nothing, so why do I stay
I could just take a slice with a knife and rid the world of this plague.

The quicker I do it, the less time I have to hurt
The sooner I grab the knife, the sooner the world will rejoice
Why keep living for nothing?

If I took my life would anyone care?
They would all forget they ever told me they loved me
Their lives wouldn't miss a beat, not for me.

I want to just fade away into nothing
I am too exhausted and hurt to keep loving
If I could I would tell you all I love you and will miss you.

Take the love I did give and hold tight
Cause it is the last as of tonight
I hope you don't cry
Because this is my good-bye




[comments] => 2 [counter] => 336 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Iesha [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
The hurting will stop now

Contributed by Iesha on Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 01:15:24 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



It would be so easy to make it all go away
I haven't felt this hurt since I was little
Why didn't I do it then, I wouldn't feel this now.

It would have been so much easier then
I would have just remembered the taunting
Then with the click of a trigger, no more hurt.

I didn't do it then because I imagined there was something to live for
It was all a trick of the mind
I see the truth now.

I am what there is to live for
That is nothing, so why do I stay
I could just take a slice with a knife and rid the world of this plague.

The quicker I do it, the less time I have to hurt
The sooner I grab the knife, the sooner the world will rejoice
Why keep living for nothing?

If I took my life would anyone care?
They would all forget they ever told me they loved me
Their lives wouldn't miss a beat, not for me.

I want to just fade away into nothing
I am too exhausted and hurt to keep loving
If I could I would tell you all I love you and will miss you.

Take the love I did give and hold tight
Cause it is the last as of tonight
I hope you don't cry
Because this is my good-bye








Copyright © Iesha ... [ 2003-12-15 01:15:24]
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Re: The hurting will stop now (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 07:21:56 PM AEST
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i am sorry you are hurting........you expressed the pain quite well here..........


Re: The hurting will stop now (User Rating: 1 )
by GoodGirl on Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 07:27:33 PM AEST
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You are very talented. Keep writing. And there is alot to live for, it doesnt seem that way when you are down, but think of the happy moments in life. That is what makes it worth it.




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