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Array ( [sid] => 29360 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => i wish i stayed wordless [time] => 2003-12-14 12:13:12 [hometext] => [bodytext] => somtimes things are just written in peoples expressions
theirs no need to speak my words of desperation
whlist these tears are flowing from depprestion
but i will any way
because i cant deal with the way
you cant give me a glance
desperation gives anything a chance
its sad when it just sqeezes it to hard
and the memories cling to your dignity like permant scars
its in the smell of the air
hope is broken and defeated
its just you and me
we dont need words
you know anything that comes from your mouth is cursed
but i still try
but you only heard my usaul cry
why dont you just end it now why?
im duleded still thats my excuse
but i do no theirs no use
but hopless words had to be spoken
whlist i patheticlly nearly choked on tears
and you burnt grass aviodind my face
we should of both stayed wordless
because just sitting with you on this curb says it all [comments] => 4 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 22 [informant] => loopylou [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
i wish i stayed wordless

Contributed by loopylou on Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 12:13:12 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



somtimes things are just written in peoples expressions
theirs no need to speak my words of desperation
whlist these tears are flowing from depprestion
but i will any way
because i cant deal with the way
you cant give me a glance
desperation gives anything a chance
its sad when it just sqeezes it to hard
and the memories cling to your dignity like permant scars
its in the smell of the air
hope is broken and defeated
its just you and me
we dont need words
you know anything that comes from your mouth is cursed
but i still try
but you only heard my usaul cry
why dont you just end it now why?
im duleded still thats my excuse
but i do no theirs no use
but hopless words had to be spoken
whlist i patheticlly nearly choked on tears
and you burnt grass aviodind my face
we should of both stayed wordless
because just sitting with you on this curb says it all




Copyright © loopylou ... [ 2003-12-14 12:13:12]
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Re: i wish i stayed wordless (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 01:06:11 PM AEST
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Lovely write BUT there are over 8 spelling mistakes on this. Perhaps you should consider the spell check option when posting.
The Spelling Bee


Re: i wish i stayed wordless (User Rating: 1 )
by Three_Blind_Mice on Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 01:47:59 PM AEST
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Spelling schmelling, this was beautiful and heartwrenching. I loved it.


Re: i wish i stayed wordless (User Rating: 1 )
by desertrose on Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 06:29:28 PM AEST
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I noticed a few spelling errors but to be honest my spelling stinks. If a mod doesn't fix them for you and if your not to offended I be happy to because this poem is beautiful hun :)



Re: i wish i stayed wordless (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 09:28:08 PM AEST
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this is a wonderful write.. its so so sad.. though its a very good poem

great job

Peace joy and hope
JENNA




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