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Array ( [sid] => 29350 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Vanish [time] => 2003-12-14 10:13:14 [hometext] => umm this is basically about a girl that ripped me appart leaving my remains upon the floor [bodytext] => Hold me with a prayer
hold me with your thoughts
although I mean
nothing to you
you know i'm falling appart

hold me with your thoughts
lie me by your side
vanished in your mind
but i'll never feel the pain you feel

I ask the question for no reply
whats the point in living
if your never by my side

it all vanishes before me

before me
everything is changing

you were everything that
helped my through the worst days
looks like things always change
you left me at your feet

hold me with your thoughts
lie me by your side
vanished in your mind
but i'll never feel the pain
in your life

sense the feeling deep inside
locked away you always hide
till the day I set you free
into the pain you bring [comments] => 6 [counter] => 261 [topic] => 34 [informant] => FadingSoul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Vanish

Contributed by FadingSoul on Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 10:13:14 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Hold me with a prayer
hold me with your thoughts
although I mean
nothing to you
you know i'm falling appart

hold me with your thoughts
lie me by your side
vanished in your mind
but i'll never feel the pain you feel

I ask the question for no reply
whats the point in living
if your never by my side

it all vanishes before me

before me
everything is changing

you were everything that
helped my through the worst days
looks like things always change
you left me at your feet

hold me with your thoughts
lie me by your side
vanished in your mind
but i'll never feel the pain
in your life

sense the feeling deep inside
locked away you always hide
till the day I set you free
into the pain you bring




Copyright © FadingSoul ... [ 2003-12-14 10:13:14]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Vanish (User Rating: 1 )
by Malice on Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 10:25:18 AM AEST
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This is really a very wonderful song. I hope the girl that ripped you apart will appreciate it and realize what she has done wrong.


Re: Vanish (User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 11:23:58 AM AEST
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it may of hurt but looking on the bright side it gave you one heck of an inspiration that turned into a great song. im really sorry you had to get hurt in the procese tho


Re: Vanish (User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 11:25:19 AM AEST
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it may of hurt but looking on the bright side it gave you one heck of an inspiration that turned into a great song. im really sorry you had to get hurt in the procese tho


Re: Vanish (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 04:17:10 PM AEST
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wow! this is very beautifully written .. and well expressed.. I know these feelings from my past.. I hope you feel much better now..

peace joy and hope

JENNA


Re: Vanish (User Rating: 1 )
by desertrose on Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 05:01:06 PM AEST
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Fading beautiful poem.No girl is with your tears and the one you find who is she is never gonna make you cry

Rose
http://www.todays-woman.net


Re: Vanish (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 10:14:50 PM AEST
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AHH, THE PLEASURE AND THE PAIN OF RELATIONSHIPS....WELL DONE I FEEL YOUR PAIN.

THE WIND....




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