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Array ( [sid] => 29313 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Crawling Through The Razor Blades [time] => 2003-12-13 20:17:48 [hometext] => It's him that makes me happy.... or is it? He is my disease and my reason for cutting, yet he is the cure. [bodytext] => I want you to romance me
Blow my mind and dance with me
Touch my face and brush away
Every fear into yesterday
I want you to understand
You hold it all in your hands
Just let me do what I will
Cut my wrist and swallow some pills

But I wonder

Would you hate the scars?
I'm just one more disillusioned fallen star
Would you be angry?
I'm just trying to find what makes me happy
But I know I'll never need the sweet release
The way I need you and your soul healing peace

I love to watch the blood flow
To me it looks beautiful
But inside I'm so afraid
I'm crawling through the razor blades
I see you through the smoky haze
Don't ignore my blurry gaze
Kiss me till the tears have dried
Until there's no more pain inside

But I know

It's all gonna end
We're just two more wounded souls trying to mend
Just two more victims
Of a heartbreakingly hopeless addiction
But I'll hold on to you until it kills me
'Cause it's being in your arms that sets me free

I don't know if I'm ever gonna make it by
But I hope I'll always be someone in your eyes
More than just a fallen star
With her arms covered in scars
Crawling through the razor blades
I don't wanna be afraid
Please don't be angry
It's you that makes me happy [comments] => 5 [counter] => 314 [topic] => 32 [informant] => MoonlitAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Crawling Through The Razor Blades

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 08:17:48 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



I want you to romance me
Blow my mind and dance with me
Touch my face and brush away
Every fear into yesterday
I want you to understand
You hold it all in your hands
Just let me do what I will
Cut my wrist and swallow some pills

But I wonder

Would you hate the scars?
I'm just one more disillusioned fallen star
Would you be angry?
I'm just trying to find what makes me happy
But I know I'll never need the sweet release
The way I need you and your soul healing peace

I love to watch the blood flow
To me it looks beautiful
But inside I'm so afraid
I'm crawling through the razor blades
I see you through the smoky haze
Don't ignore my blurry gaze
Kiss me till the tears have dried
Until there's no more pain inside

But I know

It's all gonna end
We're just two more wounded souls trying to mend
Just two more victims
Of a heartbreakingly hopeless addiction
But I'll hold on to you until it kills me
'Cause it's being in your arms that sets me free

I don't know if I'm ever gonna make it by
But I hope I'll always be someone in your eyes
More than just a fallen star
With her arms covered in scars
Crawling through the razor blades
I don't wanna be afraid
Please don't be angry
It's you that makes me happy




Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2003-12-13 20:17:48]
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Re: Crawling Through The Razor Blades (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 11:12:31 PM AEST
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Superb write. It has a wonderful cadence to it. You meld it together so well. Excellent work.


Re: Crawling Through The Razor Blades (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 03:35:25 AM AEST
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Wow..its not only sad but also chilling. venkat


Re: Crawling Through The Razor Blades (User Rating: 1 )
by deadly_blaZe on Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 08:09:34 PM AEST
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The title definately caught my attention... i liked this very much

xxEricaxX


Re: Crawling Through The Razor Blades (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 10:58:47 PM AEST
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wow - great title...
awesome poem followed
almost could be a song... I really liked this.


Re: Crawling Through The Razor Blades (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 05:20:46 PM AEST
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I love how this is sort of black and white, love and despair joined as one. You've written an amazing poem here : )
x_x_x




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