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Array ( [sid] => 29292 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Thought I was Duumb [time] => 2003-12-13 14:17:50 [hometext] => For an Ex-Friend w/ problemz [bodytext] => Thought I was dumb
Proved you wrong
Had me fooled for so long
Too bad I caught on
Sitting , plotting
Ways to hurt
To put your grimey *** under the dirt
Too bad u thought I was dumb
Now your a lonely bum
I'm leaving u to burn
In the hell that u earned
Too bad u thought I was dumb
Drunk u like a galss of rum
Your so called other friends cant be what ive been
You know what that is?

A BEST FRIEND

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 16 [informant] => B2Ks1Girl757 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Thought I was Duumb

Contributed by B2Ks1Girl757 on Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 02:17:50 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

Thought I was dumb
Proved you wrong
Had me fooled for so long
Too bad I caught on
Sitting , plotting
Ways to hurt
To put your grimey *** under the dirt
Too bad u thought I was dumb
Now your a lonely bum
I'm leaving u to burn
In the hell that u earned
Too bad u thought I was dumb
Drunk u like a galss of rum
Your so called other friends cant be what ive been
You know what that is?

A BEST FRIEND

Copyright © B2Ks1Girl757 ... [ 2003-12-13 14:17:50]
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Re: Thought I was Duumb (User Rating: 1 )
by desertrose on Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 03:03:23 PM AEST
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Wow you be angry Do you have a rose garden it is great for hiding bodies in :)
Rose
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Re: Thought I was Duumb (User Rating: 1 )
by norticus on Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 04:58:23 PM AEST
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This is how I feel about fried chicken. Well fried chicken when I make it. It just sits there plotting and popping hot grease at me. It gets all grimey and then I eat it and flush it which takes it under the dirt. The lonely bum part reminds me of after the chicken is gone. I don't know how you'd drink chicken but maybe the grease. I suppose consuming a chicken does bring us pretty close to it... like a best friend.
I give this a 3.6 on the Nortiscale.
norticus

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