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Array ( [sid] => 29281 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Comment Addict [time] => 2003-12-13 10:40:41 [hometext] => norticus, the Nortiscale, and the serious snerfs [bodytext] => Your broken heart on display
For everyone to see
You hope someone hears you
But then you met me

A snowy glare as I dissect your soul
You can't clutch my compassion
My cold hands cover your mouth
And my pen does the thrashin

Your broken heart with my marquee on top
Blinking lights divert the attention
My comment is the talk of the town
But your poem is not even mentioned

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 235 [topic] => 38 [informant] => norticus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Tributes )

Comment Addict

Contributed by norticus on Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 10:40:41 AM in AEST
Topic: Tributes

Your broken heart on display
For everyone to see
You hope someone hears you
But then you met me

A snowy glare as I dissect your soul
You can't clutch my compassion
My cold hands cover your mouth
And my pen does the thrashin

Your broken heart with my marquee on top
Blinking lights divert the attention
My comment is the talk of the town
But your poem is not even mentioned

Copyright © norticus ... [ 2003-12-13 10:40:41]
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Re: Comment Addict (User Rating: 1 )
by MrWrite on Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 12:26:35 PM AEST
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It's been a while since I've read any of your work, but I'm glad I read this one. Great write. Keep up the good work.

Re: Comment Addict (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 03:59:00 PM AEST
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your poem is well written
your rhyming has me smitten
but dear I'm no kitten
watch out for the claws

Shari

Re: Comment Addict (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 01:32:53 AM AEST
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good one - i'm sitting here with a silly grin on my face, but that may have more to do with the fact that it almost 1 AM and i.m not sleeping.

love the write , seems like lots of folks get really caught up in the comment thing.lol

merry

Re: Comment Addict (User Rating: 1 )
by Manicmuze on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 11:20:26 AM AEST
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this one is cool, i like it... :)

~ w

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