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Array ( [sid] => 29273 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Was it justice ??? [time] => 2003-12-13 05:53:52 [hometext] => For the kids that need help world over, and the team that once was.. [bodytext] => I point my pistol between your eyes,
Justice for making those kids cry.
Where you belong is in a cell,
Or maybe burning deep in hell.
Standing opposite, locked in a stare,
They are only kids, it is not fair.
Living a life abused, and misstreated.
I am proud as you are about to be defeated.
Your sins of alcohol and a needle,
Not a thought as these kids are so feeble.
Lying now in a hospital bed,
At least now they are getting fed.
Treated by strangers who actually care,
Raise your gun and pull the trigger i dare.
The kids are now safe and its just you and me.
Just give me that reason, push me and see.
For the kids we stood up and fought.
Cause of us, youll get your say in court.
Never again will you be free,
Never again kids will you see.
These kids can now live a life from fear,
Never again can you get near.
Now you live in a prison cell,
I should have sent you to burn in hell.


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Was it justice ???

Contributed by 13Hopes on Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 05:53:52 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



I point my pistol between your eyes,
Justice for making those kids cry.
Where you belong is in a cell,
Or maybe burning deep in hell.
Standing opposite, locked in a stare,
They are only kids, it is not fair.
Living a life abused, and misstreated.
I am proud as you are about to be defeated.
Your sins of alcohol and a needle,
Not a thought as these kids are so feeble.
Lying now in a hospital bed,
At least now they are getting fed.
Treated by strangers who actually care,
Raise your gun and pull the trigger i dare.
The kids are now safe and its just you and me.
Just give me that reason, push me and see.
For the kids we stood up and fought.
Cause of us, youll get your say in court.
Never again will you be free,
Never again kids will you see.
These kids can now live a life from fear,
Never again can you get near.
Now you live in a prison cell,
I should have sent you to burn in hell.






Copyright © 13Hopes ... [ 2003-12-13 05:53:52]
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Re: Was it justice ??? (User Rating: 1 )
by eternal_sorrows on Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 07:48:56 AM AEST
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OMG, this broke my heart. Only one who has lived this could write it so well with a heart as such. I know for this sounds like my childhood.

Best wishes my dear!

ES


Re: Was it justice ??? (User Rating: 1 )
by irshprnss on Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 10:05:36 AM AEST
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great write!
Diana


Re: Was it justice ??? (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 03:42:06 PM AEST
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Very emotional, packed with truths of life of young people we see all around.
My heart aches for you and for all those that simply can't find your hearts rebounds.
Young poets today have much to say, and this is just an example of one.
You are a fine poet, and with this one justice was done!
Warm hugs and much empathy.
lovingcritters
ConSue




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