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Array ( [sid] => 29238 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I remember [time] => 2003-12-12 18:45:29 [hometext] => Reposting this... Lol, with breaks this time. This should learn you Sharon to tease me about the way I wrote something hehe. [bodytext] => I remember every little thing.
I remember the first time
I truly saw you
and thought
just how beautiful
you really were.
I remember our first kiss,
and the first time we made love.
I can still remember your eyes
the first time that you said
you loved me.
I remember when I woke up
one morning and realized
you would hate me forever.
I walked away instead of try
sealing hate to fate
for what I'd done.
I remember the pain
in your eyes as
you begged and pleaded
as if it were your life.
I remember the moment,
days ago when
I realized it was true.
I will forever remember
all the wrong I've done.
I know the pain in my heart
will just be buried
yet never go away.
I remember that now I've lost you.
I remember forever,
and ever,
and always.

The book of the faulty phoenix. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 307 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Cobalt [notes] => < Edited by Mod_8 for spelling by request > [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

I remember

Contributed by Cobalt on Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 06:45:29 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I remember every little thing.
I remember the first time
I truly saw you
and thought
just how beautiful
you really were.
I remember our first kiss,
and the first time we made love.
I can still remember your eyes
the first time that you said
you loved me.
I remember when I woke up
one morning and realized
you would hate me forever.
I walked away instead of try
sealing hate to fate
for what I'd done.
I remember the pain
in your eyes as
you begged and pleaded
as if it were your life.
I remember the moment,
days ago when
I realized it was true.
I will forever remember
all the wrong I've done.
I know the pain in my heart
will just be buried
yet never go away.
I remember that now I've lost you.
I remember forever,
and ever,
and always.

The book of the faulty phoenix.

Copyright © Cobalt ... [ 2003-12-12 18:45:29]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I remember (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 08:20:08 PM AEST
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Love it now as I loved it then..Except now its better lol.Glad I spoke up :P *wink*
Deep feelings here,really moves me.
Sharon

Re: I remember (User Rating: 1 )
by eternal_sorrows on Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 07:57:55 AM AEST
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Absolutly beautiful write! I love it!

ES

Re: I remember (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 09:42:37 AM AEST
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Sad, wise, heart wrenching
My heart just goes out to you....

Kie

Re: I remember (User Rating: 1 )
by Three_Blind_Mice on Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 12:31:18 PM AEST
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Absolutely heartbreaking, a very emotion filled write.

the Drunk

Re: I remember (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 01:51:47 AM AEST
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A truly heartfelt and beautiful write ... I felt these feelings all the way through ... Jan

Re: I remember (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 12:05:04 PM AEST
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I agree with everybody else.
It's a sad write, but it's beautiful.
*S* Cynthia

Re: I remember (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 05:07:03 AM AEST
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Wow... it's beautiful. Tender and sweet, yet so sad... we all hurt people and lose people. This poem really made me feel it, though. Beautiful.

~ Moonlit

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