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Array ( [sid] => 29201 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Shes Everything* [time] => 2003-12-12 01:12:25 [hometext] => I didnt really know what topic to put this in... [bodytext] => gracefully,
her silence make words seem like such a waste,
raindrop tears that you can almost taste,
her simple beauty even gods embrace,

shes everything, shes anything,
a thousand words, shes poetry,
everything we want to be,
a silent song,
sung beautifully,

pale face, rosy cheeks,
frail body, empty and weak,
but shes everything in our eyes,
faded and lonely as she dies,
a simple truth to all our lies,

admire from so far away,
never close it seems,
mysterious, she must remain,
to keep believing these naive dreams,

shes anything, shes everything,
something shell never know,
in all her beauty, we turn away,
what a gift to an angel we bestow.

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 339 [topic] => 30 [informant] => Chanti [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => PoemsonBeauty )

Shes Everything*

Contributed by Chanti on Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 01:12:25 AM in AEST
Topic: PoemsonBeauty

gracefully,
her silence make words seem like such a waste,
raindrop tears that you can almost taste,
her simple beauty even gods embrace,

shes everything, shes anything,
a thousand words, shes poetry,
everything we want to be,
a silent song,
sung beautifully,

pale face, rosy cheeks,
frail body, empty and weak,
but shes everything in our eyes,
faded and lonely as she dies,
a simple truth to all our lies,

admire from so far away,
never close it seems,
mysterious, she must remain,
to keep believing these naive dreams,

shes anything, shes everything,
something shell never know,
in all her beauty, we turn away,
what a gift to an angel we bestow.

Copyright © Chanti ... [ 2003-12-12 01:12:25]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Shes Everything* (User Rating: 1 )
by infedelity_hurts on Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 05:31:10 AM AEST
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man that is cool... completely undescribeable
awesome stuff.. keep posting.. i'll keep reading... plz see what you think of mine.. even tho it is a mere shadow compared to yours...

Re: Shes Everything* (User Rating: 1 )
by Nick_85Ingram on Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 07:45:46 AM AEST
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good one...i write along the lines of the same stuff..

Re: Shes Everything* (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 09:23:16 AM AEST
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I really became enthralled with this piece. I read it numerous times and each time came to a different conclusion of what it means. I thought it was GREAT!

Kie

Re: Shes Everything* (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 04:34:14 PM AEST
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wow great stuff I liked how u showed her inner turmoil in the middle stanza u should have expanded on that, but I thought it was awesome nonetheless.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Shes Everything* (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 10:49:10 AM AEST
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Excellent poem. One of the best I have read all day.
Keep writing.

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