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Array ( [sid] => 29189 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Who will she be? [time] => 2003-12-11 22:19:26 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I can feel you drifting away
Drifting through the air like smoke
Soon we’ll be strangers
I wish it were a dream, even a joke
But the question that haunts my soul
Is 'Who will she be?', this girl
This girl that captures the heart I could not
A heart for which so hard I fought
Years from now
I see you holding her tenderly
I smile and say hello
While my heart cries silently
The ring on her finger
Glistens like a dagger in the sunlight
Does she love you like I do, George?
With all her might
Walking away
I hear you say
‘Oh, no one honey, just an old friend’
As I whisper under my breath
‘So long, my darling.
I’ll love you ‘til death’
But the question still remains
Who will she be?
Everyday, I hope and pray
That she will be me [comments] => 3 [counter] => 223 [topic] => 22 [informant] => goodgirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Who will she be?

Contributed by goodgirl on Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 10:19:26 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I can feel you drifting away
Drifting through the air like smoke
Soon we’ll be strangers
I wish it were a dream, even a joke
But the question that haunts my soul
Is 'Who will she be?', this girl
This girl that captures the heart I could not
A heart for which so hard I fought
Years from now
I see you holding her tenderly
I smile and say hello
While my heart cries silently
The ring on her finger
Glistens like a dagger in the sunlight
Does she love you like I do, George?
With all her might
Walking away
I hear you say
‘Oh, no one honey, just an old friend’
As I whisper under my breath
‘So long, my darling.
I’ll love you ‘til death’
But the question still remains
Who will she be?
Everyday, I hope and pray
That she will be me

Copyright Â© goodgirl ... [ 2003-12-11 22:19:26]
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Re: Who will she be? (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 10:21:46 PM AEST
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Well goodgirl, keep on truckin' I suppose - now that sounds beyond cheezy. Wow, this sounds so familiar. I like this. It's good stuff you have here.
~Remy~

Re: Who will she be? (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 10:29:19 PM AEST
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Beautiful :)

Re: Who will she be? (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 12:16:24 AM AEST
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This was a pretty good write. I enjoyed reading it. I hope it turns out for the best to you.

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