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[aid] => mick
[title] => Something To Think About
[time] => 2003-12-11 22:16:16
[hometext] => To an old friend, I hope that you understand...
[bodytext] => I should given two weeks notice... But what is that going to do but make you angry? You almost made it look so hopeless... That's done for now and I'm out Can you hear me? Will you see me? Or is there something more that I should think about Is it ending? Is it starting? This hopeless hope is stuck like the words in my throat That's the best of communication I've ever had... With a silent reply It was brilliant dance and I loved it Like the perfect chance to make it But it had to end or change hands But it had to go you understand I could have done it so much better... I failed you in and out of every circumstance Couldn't even write to you a letter... Without making you guilty Will you dance now? Take a chance now? Or is there something more that you should think about Are we ending? Are we starting? This hopeless hope is stuck like the words in my throat That's the best of communication I've ever had... With still no reply It was brilliant dance and I loved it Like the perfect chance to make it But it had to end or change hands But it had to go you understand It was brilliant dance and I loved it Like the perfect chance to make it It had to end or change hands I have to go you understand We share a bill but don't share a heart They said it was doomed right at the start I didn't hear them, I should have heard them What's the thing that I deserve then? I'm up for grace but you haven't changed Not digging for apologies just loose change A little nickle of something besides you But again you go back to being you What's the point again of this little game? Everything looks to be just the same Tell me now the point of this game It was brilliant dance and I loved it Like the perfect chance to make it But it had to end or change hands But it had to go you understand I have to go you understand... Do you understand... Do you... Do you... [comments] => 1 [counter] => 223 [topic] => 22 [informant] => remy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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