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Array ( [sid] => 29173 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hurt [time] => 2003-12-11 18:38:50 [hometext] => I might have submitted this like a year ago, but it was a bout like 6 differnt things... [bodytext] => Hurt
By:Nicholas Ingram
Seeing, looking the torture in the eyes,
I stabbed you in the heart,
wanna try somthing?? Just start,
The worries are like the pressure of glass held to my Heart,
Someone is out to get me,
Ruin me,
Murdering my meaningful memories,
And MY NEW LIFE, I have sacrificed,
Everything I ever had,
Showering in my tears,
Bathing in loneliness,
Watching the blackness of my room spin,
Breaking my deep fears of losing you,
The brightest, blondest, ray of sunlight to fill my dark dayz,
Nothing.

I feel gutless, empty,
I can not even stomach the ruthless,
Feeling I have because of,
Being made into what people think and say,
For once in my life, I want it to desperately go away!
People never think of what they say,
And how it ***** with other people,
How can I even talk to her now?
With the thoughts, assumed of me,
Consumed of me,
I drive on your happiness,
And you’re living,
You’re my last blessing,
And it seems you’re being torn from me now,
What can I do? With the overwhelming mayhem,
I think the worst thing,
Ending,
Ending my happiness,
Why does this have to be so hard?
The old gossip, and lies, intoxicates my life,
DESTROYING ME!!!

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Hurt

Contributed by Nick_85Ingram on Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 06:38:50 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Hurt
By:Nicholas Ingram
Seeing, looking the torture in the eyes,
I stabbed you in the heart,
wanna try somthing?? Just start,
The worries are like the pressure of glass held to my Heart,
Someone is out to get me,
Ruin me,
Murdering my meaningful memories,
And MY NEW LIFE, I have sacrificed,
Everything I ever had,
Showering in my tears,
Bathing in loneliness,
Watching the blackness of my room spin,
Breaking my deep fears of losing you,
The brightest, blondest, ray of sunlight to fill my dark dayz,
Nothing.

I feel gutless, empty,
I can not even stomach the ruthless,
Feeling I have because of,
Being made into what people think and say,
For once in my life, I want it to desperately go away!
People never think of what they say,
And how it ***** with other people,
How can I even talk to her now?
With the thoughts, assumed of me,
Consumed of me,
I drive on your happiness,
And you’re living,
You’re my last blessing,
And it seems you’re being torn from me now,
What can I do? With the overwhelming mayhem,
I think the worst thing,
Ending,
Ending my happiness,
Why does this have to be so hard?
The old gossip, and lies, intoxicates my life,
DESTROYING ME!!!

Copyright Â© Nick_85Ingram ... [ 2003-12-11 18:38:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Hurt (User Rating: 1 )
by harshreality on Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 11:09:17 PM AEST
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I really liked this. It reminded me of someone I care about. He has a real messed up past and it really bothers him. Doesn't feel like he can be with anyone b/c of it. He hurt me more than once in the 7 yrs that I've loved him, but it hasn't changed my faith in him. People learn from their mistakes. I've been through things you could barely imagine with him and if I had the chance to have him back I'd take it without a 2nd thought. No matter what people think or say about you, wether you know it or not theres someone out there who will love and accept you. Everyone is worthy of love.

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