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I'm searching... searching for something
and along the way I see your face . You stare at me straight in the eyes as if you weren't telling a lie

As you spoke the pit pulls you down even further and pushes me farther away
I scream your name only to find it's in bitter vain

Rough edges of the night soothing through my sullen dreams

sinking below to the Pit of decption, I search for something... along the way I find you staring straight at me through your eyes...
so straight just as if you never lied

Jenna [comments] => 4 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 13 [informant] => PhantomVampyress [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Pit of Deceit

Contributed by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 03:01:36 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Sinking below to the pit of deception
I'm searching... searching for something
and along the way I see your face . You stare at me straight in the eyes as if you weren't telling a lie

As you spoke the pit pulls you down even further and pushes me farther away
I scream your name only to find it's in bitter vain

Rough edges of the night soothing through my sullen dreams

sinking below to the Pit of decption, I search for something... along the way I find you staring straight at me through your eyes...
so straight just as if you never lied

Jenna

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Re: Pit of Deceit (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 03:32:24 PM AEST
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That was sooo interesting... I want to say things certain ways but I fear it would be taken as offense... This just wowed me...

Re: Pit of Deceit (User Rating: 1 )
by Jeff9Man on Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 03:57:28 PM AEST
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very good, i like this one. i'm drawn to anything i feel is driven by strong emotion. you have talent.

Re: Pit of Deceit (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 06:21:09 PM AEST
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good title enjoyed this. I guess this could be about many things anything that drags u down. if I may ask who were u writing about?

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Pit of Deceit (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 10:16:31 PM AEST
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Extremely good...if I may say so myself....Just to ask....Do you still trust this person? o_O

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