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Double Vision
Contributed by
JPMcMillan
on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 11:46:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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When walking on a moonbeam,
It's best that you come clean,
You can't deceive your own dream.
This is true.
To play you must be able,
And believe in your fable,
Protect, but don't disable.
This is true.
So, wallow in the sunshine,
Drink a bit of my wine,
It really may be fine.
This is true.......................Isn't It?
Copyright ©
JPMcMillan
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2003-12-10 23:46:51] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Double Vision
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wrybod on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 07:54:02 PM AEST (User
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Let's wallow in the hormones
Lick a few ice cream cones
Make eachother smile
for a while.
I enjoyed this so much just felt like joining in
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Re: Double Vision
(User Rating: 1 ) by a_bear on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 12:18:14 AM AEST (User
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I liked the thought but had trouble with the rythem..but then I'm caught up in a different type of poetry. sometimes iambic..sometimes freestyele,,sometimes haiku...whatever comes. But the thought was very very nice. Oh...why double vision? I'm a bit slow... |
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