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Array ( [sid] => 29104 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => say goodbye [time] => 2003-12-10 21:29:16 [hometext] => [bodytext] => so happy
but
now i feel like cryin'
why does it
have to be like this
why can't you just stay
why must we part
the inseperatable duo
seperated
i feel the tears
they won't come
i'll miss you
like hell

what will i do
without you
life will be so borin
who will i turn to
who will hold my hand
tell me its all ok
i need you here
by my side

how can i make it
without you
i'll be a depressed wreck
always
they're be glimpes of happiness
when i out wit the boiz
or in private quarters
and hours
but
they'll dissappear
and you won't be there
to cheer me up

you're my best friend
life is changin'
struggles and drama
you always had my back
what now
don't go
change your mind
i need you
here next to me

but you've made up your mind
and there is no changin' it
even though
i wish i could
so
i guess
all thats left
is to say
goodbye [comments] => 4 [counter] => 757 [topic] => 21 [informant] => ml03 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

say goodbye

Contributed by ml03 on Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 09:29:16 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

so happy
but
now i feel like cryin'
why does it
have to be like this
why can't you just stay
why must we part
the inseperatable duo
seperated
i feel the tears
they won't come
i'll miss you
like hell

what will i do
without you
life will be so borin
who will i turn to
who will hold my hand
tell me its all ok
i need you here
by my side

how can i make it
without you
i'll be a depressed wreck
always
they're be glimpes of happiness
when i out wit the boiz
or in private quarters
and hours
but
they'll dissappear
and you won't be there
to cheer me up

you're my best friend
life is changin'
struggles and drama
you always had my back
what now
don't go
change your mind
i need you
here next to me

but you've made up your mind
and there is no changin' it
even though
i wish i could
so
i guess
all thats left
is to say
goodbye

Copyright © ml03 ... [ 2003-12-10 21:29:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: say goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 09:34:35 PM AEST
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Sometimes that's just the way it is but that doesn't make it any less painfull.
Hang tuff!
peace, joy, luv, huggs,
emy

Re: say goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Lessa on Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 12:15:33 AM AEST
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Thats beutiful

Re: say goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 05:44:22 AM AEST
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A heart felt write..good work. venkat

Re: say goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 03:22:51 AM AEST
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It's tough but.....try reading my poem "He's not the only one".....

I like your style very much. This is only the second of yours I've read but I'm going to read them all

bob

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