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Array ( [sid] => 29046 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pay for it [time] => 2003-12-10 01:13:25 [hometext] => this is a poem i wrote a year ago.. I wanted revenge for the pain i was caused.. thank GOd I am past this though [bodytext] => Have you ever desired Revenge so bad that
you would stop at nothing to do so?

Oh! How satisfying it feels deep in your soul
to see those who sought your destruction
crumble at your mercy, crying out your name
just to end their Pain!

But just watching them in pain isn't quite enough , they have to pay for what they done to you, so their cries you shut your very ears to . for the only way to know your pain is for them to feel it like you deep inside, through their heart, inside the middle of your soul!

Screaming in vain for your help, you just stare and think "Now this is finally Fair"

For those who hurt me badly their hurt shall be given back ten times over undividely
just as you've done to me , it shall be unto you.... but worse!

JENNA [comments] => 2 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 13 [informant] => PhantomVampyress [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Pay for it

Contributed by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 01:13:25 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Have you ever desired Revenge so bad that
you would stop at nothing to do so?

Oh! How satisfying it feels deep in your soul
to see those who sought your destruction
crumble at your mercy, crying out your name
just to end their Pain!

But just watching them in pain isn't quite enough , they have to pay for what they done to you, so their cries you shut your very ears to . for the only way to know your pain is for them to feel it like you deep inside, through their heart, inside the middle of your soul!

Screaming in vain for your help, you just stare and think "Now this is finally Fair"

For those who hurt me badly their hurt shall be given back ten times over undividely
just as you've done to me , it shall be unto you.... but worse!

JENNA

Copyright © PhantomVampyress ... [ 2003-12-10 01:13:25]
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Re: Pay for it (User Rating: 1 )
by mercedes on Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 01:14:59 AM AEST
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I can understand this and have felt that way many times. Glad you are over it.

Re: Pay for it (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 11:24:17 AM AEST
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'to see those who sought your destruction
crumble at your mercy, crying out your name '
I liked these lines for sure.
'But just watching them in pain isn't quite enough , they have to pay for what they done to you'
These ones as well. Great write. Those lines had a lot of power to them for me.

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