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love is an abandoned dream

Contributed by xxxlivingdeadxxx on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 10:53:06 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief



like a razor it cuts the sky to open the bloodgates upon the wretched earth that corrupted what love is supposed to be. i am dead to this bittersweet curse called love that was layed upon my black filled heart. to know this is just as much a pleasure as it is a pain, for u want it, but u know the consequences. the pleasure is that u know to stay away from it for it will only make u suffer like a cattle with it's throat cut only waiting for someone to take it away from everything. the pain is that you want someone so unatainable and u know in ur mind that they will never be urs just because ur not good enough. i have cut and cried to make it go away but it simply stays and never leaves. from this little hurt i have tried to end it all but even then it never lets me be. it's like a bad dream that will haunt me for the rest of my life, because no matter how much u try to forget, it always comes back and shoves it's way back into ur soul like an abandoned dream.







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Re: love is an abandoned dream (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 10:57:41 PM AEST
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Sad but great writing!
Hang tuff.
peace, joy, luv, huggs,
emy




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