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Array ( [sid] => 29001 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You stupid person [time] => 2003-12-09 16:45:18 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Friends forever
Is what I thought we ‘d be
But that all changed when you
Left for somebody else but me
Oh! What you became to be
Is what I don’t really don’t understand
So badly I hope you’ll become someday
A person no one will want to see
How cruel you became
What a liar you backstabber
I will never forget the days
When you were so forbidding to me
Those ugly horrifying weeks
When you left me in no peace
God, I hope someday
For such brutality you pay
You don’t deserve a world like this
A place of beautifulness and happiness
I’ll tell you what you deserve
A place of gloomy shadows
A place where witches live
Who shall eat you up one day
I am glad I left you before it was to late
Because I have finally found a
Friend much better than you.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 365 [topic] => 16 [informant] => starcheat [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )
You stupid person

Contributed by starcheat on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 04:45:18 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



Friends forever
Is what I thought we ‘d be
But that all changed when you
Left for somebody else but me
Oh! What you became to be
Is what I don’t really don’t understand
So badly I hope you’ll become someday
A person no one will want to see
How cruel you became
What a liar you backstabber
I will never forget the days
When you were so forbidding to me
Those ugly horrifying weeks
When you left me in no peace
God, I hope someday
For such brutality you pay
You don’t deserve a world like this
A place of beautifulness and happiness
I’ll tell you what you deserve
A place of gloomy shadows
A place where witches live
Who shall eat you up one day
I am glad I left you before it was to late
Because I have finally found a
Friend much better than you.




Copyright © starcheat ... [ 2003-12-09 16:45:18]
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Re: You stupid person (User Rating: 1 )
by MissLee on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 04:48:02 PM AEST
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Wow..that hit home for me...sniff...good job kiddo.


Re: You stupid person (User Rating: 1 )
by amandajean on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 05:39:17 PM AEST
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This was an excellent poem. I loved all the emotion!


Re: You stupid person (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 05:59:02 PM AEST
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Lots of anger & emotion in this poem. You were very effective in expressing it.

Kie




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